Great story mah bro. Just two tips fer ya to keep in mind from now on.

Indenting makes your work look clean and proffesional and just overall more pleassing to look at.

When quoteing something someone is saying you want to use 'these' instead of "these".

For example:

"And she was all like 'OMG!' and he was all like 'WTF!' it was totally hillarious!"

Bad example I know but that's what happens when I'm up at 3:31 reading your stories.

Now update soon. I want to see Arctica push Xavier off a building because that's just funny.

Never been much for Ranma/Nabiki pairings but your story looks promising so far. *snicker* Wild Flower. I bet Ranma loves that hero name.

I find it funny. I havent been able to find any RanmaCoH crossovers, the we both start one at nearly the same time. Go us!

Keep up the good work.

Interesting...

Never played the game and probably never will... but I like the story so far.

Very nice. This has promise and I'm curious to see where you go with this.

This is different. I like it so far. Good start.