aw.
i always pictured larxene and namine with a big sister little sister relationship, like roxas and axel's brother relationship.

I read your first chapter here and it was uber funny! I like how you can so easily shift into the world of angst. Though I must comment that it struck me as the tiniest bit sappy, I really admire the sadness...and the hope shining through it all. Overall, AWESOME!

*Runs away crying*
*Comes back*
*Takes out paper and pencil, then asks you how you got so good*

TOO FREAKING GOOD!! How the hell did you get so good? I envy you so much...write another one-shot soon, ok?! I hope more people review your stories and one-shots because they dont know what they're missing. Your writings are so clear, I can literally see the things happening in my head when I read the words you wrote. Damn, damn, damn, so damn good. Well, I will stop my rambling. But, still, you gotta tell me how you got so good. ~_~

Damn, even though this was OOC, it was amazing. The detail you put in your writing is just unbelievable to me. Seriously. How the hell did you get so good at writing?! You need to tell me your secrets lol. But, really, you have talent. Your one-shots are so freaking good.It's totaly worth my time reading them!! How the heck do you come up with such good ideas?!

Aw. luv this too.

Wow, creative idea about the letters. So sweet

Another wonderful poem!

Sweet poem. It totally compares Kairi with a Nobody :)

wow! cool!!
i liked the descriptions of how you showed marluxia to be the roses himself. Even though marluxia is evil and watnot i liked how you showed a possitive side to him, a delicate and sensitive side.
your desriptions(diction) keeps your stories alive and worth reading.

keep up the AwesumLicious work!

GREAT! it was really good. i liked the irritation and anger that you applied to larxene, and the kind of softness at the end with both larxene and axel.

ps. when i was reading this i almost spit out my drink when i was reading the "devil picture of larxene" part lol that was hillarious!

Lemme tell you the truth: Marluxia is not one of my favourites, he's in the black list of DAMNATION in my books.

So I'll praise your writings ONLY.

By the way, I suddenly felt disgusted at Namine.

Another good one-shot, I'm proud of you.

Aw cute one girl! nice job!

Wow! Very discriptive! I like!

I love roses, black roses. I have never seen any of those kind but in some movie I saw. I forgot its name but it had bull's eyes in and the song of Bring Me Back To Life. Anyway, I love the way you write, very smooth and clear. You don't even use the big vocabulary the wrong way but in a right way to even entice the readers more into your story.

-Brenu