| Reviews for Four Taiyoukai Stripes |
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loretta537 11/6/08 . chapter 4these are really good oneshots, i think you should write more. |
AdidasRed 7/21/08 . chapter 4aw...kawaii!p |
Santorsola 10/31/07 . chapter 4Sesshomaru has done well, but so have you! (that sounds really cheezy but I'm being honest) I can only hope that there will be more Taiyoukai Stripes, so please keep writing :) Santorsola XD |
Silent Scribe 10/31/07 . chapter 4*smile* You do have me blushing with all this praise! But thank you very much (I'm not so deserving). Anyway, I thought this chapter was well planned as it juxtaposes Sesshomaru's new found affections for Rin and how they carry on into the future with the overall tying up of the Sesshomaru-tachi. Simple but perfectly sweet. Perhaps a second set of stories are in order? Keep writing! |
adeaneri 10/30/07 . chapter 4that was execlent well written. the characters stayed true. i will miss your penmanship. but all good great thing will come to an end. you never know the next might be better. chao |
Silent Scribe 10/25/07 . chapter 3I always think short's cute and gives the writer the opportunity to be more poignant in his/her work. You did a fine job with that here on this much wondered topic. I look forward to the final stripe. |
Silent Scribe 10/24/07 . chapter 2Yes, Sesshomaru OOC-ness (he talks more through actions than words), but it was cute and worth it! Rin's last line really fits. Sidenote, in Japanese there are no such things as plurals. "Hana" can mean one flower or a cluster depending on context. |
Silent Scribe 10/24/07 . chapter 1Poor Jaken always gets the brunt! Ah, but he gets to stay! :D The Japanese dialogue kind of disrupts the reading when used in long spurts, but helps for a cultural feel. |
Santorsola 10/15/07 . chapter 2I loved it! Sure, Sessy wouldn't normally go and outright say he loves Rin, but it's very kawaii. 'Emotions'(other than that cool and collected rage) are what Sesshoumaru's learning from his ward, love being the formost, in my opinion. Keep it up! |
adeaneri 10/5/07 . chapter 1nice... |
Santorsola 10/5/07 . chapter 1This is a great little fic! For Japanese learners such as myself, it was awesome to not need the translations list to understand this, so keep it up! ...I guess Jaken can really be useful...sometimes. Santo |