Great story! Very well written, thank you for sharing I loved it!

Nicely written and you stayed true to the book. Good job!

Poor Severus. I really do despise that old man.

Nicely written. I like the idea that Snape had figured it anyway.

"If Voldemort should read Harry’s mind and see you acting for him—”

That was Dumbledore not even trying to hide his duplicity. (Why bother? Snape must know what a liar the old man is by now.) A few memories earlier, Dumbledore was saying that he could safely trust his secrets to "a boy ... who has a direct connection into Voldemort's mind" because "Voldemort fears that connection ... Lord Voldemort's soul, maimed as it is, cannot bear close contact with a soul like Harry's..."

Very well written. I think you captured Severus' point of view very well.

Great "missing scene". I especially like:

“Severus, Severus,” Albus said. “I trust Harry.

which mirrors Albus telling Harry so many times that he trusts Severus!

This was a very good rendition of the chapter. I actually like this better than the one that's in the book. Then again, as you can tell by my pen name, I'm a bit biased when it comes to this issue. Anyway, great job.

Very good! This seems to be exactly what Severus would have been thinking in that scene.