Reviews for Defying Nature's Laws

Reviews For: Defying Nature's Laws

Don-Jam 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abuseGood Job. I love it, Good workI not like the Teen-pregnancy but that is what live is like! Think You. I hope you do mere. Please don't take any offense to this, I'm not picking on anyone in any way: To what say 'swk30'. There is NOT a much higher chance of birth defects for first cousins. It is only 4.7%-5.28% (or the same as 40-your-old+ women). It is 3% for most of pop anyway.(see the April 2002, Journal of Genetic Counseling) Think You for not making one of them adopted!! And I have seen research that shows that because they are cousins, they attraction to each other, (a lot of the things we like are down do our DNA, and our looks are down do our DNA, so we look for someone who look a bet like us, it in our DNA for us do to so, [have a look at all ever one you know]). It OK the the Bible, in U.K. Law(were I live, and a lot do it) and in most of the world it is OK, if not seen as a GOOD thing.
sert 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseYoda: BenxGwen, facinating it is. Chapters, make more of them you can. This is SERT sighning off...
Mariah L. P. Smith 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abusethis is naste in so nany ways possible but i like it
Sweatshirt Shiro 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseDespite that I feel irrelevant to this pairing I could not help but feel that things should not have gone so smoothly for Ben and Gwen and their family, I had expected at least a little bit of conflict... but nontheless I enjoyed this fic very much and I hope you continue to write.
DOTMW 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseSo wrong...but so good. I love romance stories that kinda creep me out.
gothboymylove 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abusehm...not sure what i think. Ben and Gwen are kinda cute together, and stuff, and it's not a bad story, but im not sure about the characterization. and wouldn't their kid have a name that rhymes with a number, lol?
`3 t e r n i t y _ x 2007-10-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseman that was awesome. good job
aaml4everfc 2007-10-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseAs serious as the theme of this story is (Incest, Teen-sex/pregnancy) I couldn't stop myself from laughing especially seeing as how they actually sought out to explain it to the parents, instead of them being found out by accident. It was a great story, the only minor detail I would change would by Ella's name seeing as how it should match the name of a number. Other than that it was great.
cheeseboy 2007-10-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's good, but could you atleast make one of them adopted?
acosta perez jose ramiro 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseNot bad. You have to work on capitalizing plus separating each dialogue in separate lines or paragraphs, but it's a good story. Keep the good writing.
Mewtwo 2007-10-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou've got some talent brewing here...
swk3000 2007-10-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice idea, but it does have 1 problem. Mainly, that when related people have kids, there's a much higher chance for the child to have birth defects, or to die before they are able to reproduce. For Ben and Gwen, having kids would be a very bad idea, and not just because it's wrong. Now, many authors get around that by making one of the two adopted (for some reason, they always choose Gwen). This has it's own problems. If Gwen's adoptive parents treat her as their own child, then she and Ben will see each other as cousins, and there's actually research that shows that because of that, neither will have any attraction to each other. There's also the fact that having kids at such a young age brings it's own share of problems. Don't get me wrong, I like the Ben/Gwen pairing myself, but I'm realistic enough to realize that it's really not going to happen. It's more likely that Ben and Gwen will be very close, kinda like 'Best Friends for Life', since fighting aliens and saving each other's lives tends to create a much deeper bond than most cousins would share. Please don't take any offense to this; while I don't review every story I read, this one went a lot farther than most do, so it compelled me to reply. I'm not picking on you in any way.

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