 writer6886 2009-10-19 . chapter 17Well just finished you story and I could hardly put it down. I must say it is really good. The ending was perfect for the world of Naruto. I mean seriously I did not see that coming. One does wonder what will happen between those three. You know they do remind me a bit of the Archie comics. Naruto-Archie, Sakura-Veronica, and Hinata-Betty. Wonder if you had that in mind. Anyway my final rating five out of five stars. Awsome! |
 writer6886 2009-10-15 . chapter 12A rabbit? Man that is cold. |
 writer6886 2009-10-15 . chapter 11Talk about killing the moment. |
 writer6886 2009-10-15 . chapter 10What and interesting story. Its impossible for anyone to know there the story could be headed. It does keep one interested. |
 writer6886 2009-10-11 . chapter 6A pity the assassin left. It could have been a dead mans party. The Assassin was a nice touch. It appears your leaning more toward NaruHina however the story is still young. I love it. |
 writer6886 2009-10-10 . chapter 5You have a very odd way of setting things up. You hint at NaruHina and NejiToph yet continue with hints of NaruSaku and NejiTen. Where do the relation ships truly go? I'm dying to find out. Who knew Hinata was a smart alec. |
 writer6886 2009-10-09 . chapter 4Why do I have a bad feeling about Hiashi? And truth be told. Zuko really is alot like Sasuke. Nice job looking forward to the rest. |
 kdunc15 2009-08-22 . chapter 9 great chapter, tensions are getting higher, great story cant wait to finish it! |
 Vorago Atrox 2009-07-31 . chapter 7That SakuHina scene was one of the best accidental lesbian scenes I have ever read. I was loling all over the place. |
 person 2009-07-20 . chapter 9 man y does sakura have to ruin it for hinata. y does she like naruto to hinata deserves him |
 dude 2009-07-20 . chapter 7 oh k that was cool werid and partly hot all togeather |
 Yuuki Noyama 2009-06-20 . chapter 17OH ** LOL MAN!
I love the epilogue...
but what happened to Katara and Aang? no epi for them? Dang. |
 Yuuki Noyama 2009-06-19 . chapter 8THAT BIGGER WITH HIS JUTSU!
Madness! lol |
 Yuuki Noyama 2009-06-19 . chapter 4HAHAHA, "Im blind, not deaf." that reminds me of a warcraft character from Defense of The Ancients. |
 narutos vixen 2009-05-16 . chapter 17...so is this naruhina right |