Nice Story!

A well written story but I have two problems with it:

My secondary problem: How can you keep supporting the closet pervert that is Nodoka? I can only hope that under one roof is NOT a NegixNodoka...

My primary problem: Your portrayal of demons in your stories leaves a lot to be desired, in your stories all demons are evil and run rampant, this is not how it is in Mahou Sensei Negima! in the manga the demons are generally quite friendly and must be summoned to manifest in the plane of existence Mahou Sensei Negima! occurs in. I know demons are a convenient stock villian in stories relating to magic but that does not mean you should use them in a way that is so cliched.

This is not a flame this is simply pointing out two problems in your stories that will hopefully be fixed in the future.

To all other reviewers of stories, is it too much to ask that you use reasonable argument, proper spelling and grammar and that you don't flame for the sake of it.

In summary of the above points use under one roof to have an unconvential or rare have a pairing such as NegixKu Fei or KotaroxKaede and have the demons act as they do in the manga.

Until next review goodbye.

kehehe

Yue grew some balls, damn. Smart of her to take care of loose ends though.

I'd say this is my favorite fan-fic. It's really well-written, and I especially like how well you portray NegixNodoka.

Please write Under One Roof!

This is, by far, the best Negima! story I've ever read, and the fourth best story ever (behind three Naruto fics). When I read how Nodoka died, I was thinking "Oh, no no no no. No. You've gotta be kidding me." Then when I read she survived, I was elated. And Negi's choice for a partner makes sense. Asuna has to face whatever is thrown at him as well, so why not together? Plus it will keep Nodoka safe. Which is what Negi wants most. I'd have chosen Nodoka, but that's just me. :3

MAN THIS IS AWESOME! nice negixnodoka pair though mine favorite was negixasuna but it got crushed :( or maybe not hehe
anywaysi hope you make more negima an Negima story with negi with the dark magic MENACE MAGIA EREBEA! BUAHAHAHAHA that would be awesome :P (a different story line with same person ofcourse and a different pairing srry if i am picky could be a nice story then buahahahah xD)

That is the single-most greatest Negima story I have ever read. The storyline and all the other story elements went perfectly together. I have a lot of favorites on , but I must say that this one of my MOST favorite.

A wonderful final chapter, I like that Asuna uncertain/tentative in calling Nekane sis and whet Negi said to what he thought was Nodoka's dead body. Another good part how Nodoka survived and Negi's reaction to finding out she was alive as well as how Nana scolded him. I also like how Negi told Nodoka who he would be takeing as his permanent partner and how Nodoka took it. Yet Another good part how Asuna told Ayaka about her new found relationship with Negi and how Ayaka took it as well as how Asuna comforted her oldest "friend".
P.S. You really ought to write a sequal to this fic, hopefully one that focuses on how the relationships between Asuna, Negi, Ayaka, Yue and Kotaro.

Another very good chapter, I like really like what Kotaro's artifact does and how Yue finished of Galin. Another good part is Negi's attch on his Grandfather and the explination of what the spell Nodoka cast was. I also like Nicholas' last hurrah and how he chose to end his life.

Yet another great chapter, I like what Kotaro's artfact is and how little he likes it. Another good part is Nicholas admiration of how well the fighters Negi's class were doing and how watching Asuna made him recall how his daughter in law died. I also like how Nicholas responded to Evangeline's barking at him and that she was only lightly affected by it.

Another great chapter, I like Negi and his siblings insistance on joining the battle as well as how Galin reveald his true nature to Nicholas. Another good part is how Chisame trapped Galin and what she told her rodent servents to do with him! I also like how Konoka ended up saveing Setsuna and Eva.

Another very good chapter, I like how Kotaro advance his relationship with Yue and that they Pactio'ed. Another good part is Asuna's insistance on seeing the painting and what was revealed about her past due to that (it makes sense, why else would Asuna smell like Nekane), although i'd have figgured Asuna would focus on the paintings eyes since she has Heterochromia (differnt colored eyes, although a good joke could be made of some one thinking it's a disease). I also like Nicholas' reaction to learning that Negi fought Graf Von Herrmann and that he blamed Konoemon.
Minor time line problem, in order to be Asuna's older sister Nekane would have to be in her thirties since Asuna looked like a kindergardener during the war Nagi and Ala rubra fought in which was twenty years ago. So unless Nekane and Asuna aged the smae Nekane is much to young to be Asuna' Neechan.

Another great chapter, I like Nodoka and Yue's discusion of what happened at the party. Another good part is there discovery of a painting of "Asuna" as well as how Nicholas tricked Kotaro. I also really like Asuna's fight (both verbal and physical) with Galin and especialy how she ended it.
BTW I feel the need to comment on the wisdom or rather lack of wisdom Nicholas showed in choseing a ally cat to be his "loyal" familer/partner, Cats especialy strays aren't known for there loyalty. For loyalty it's better look to a dog.

This is a Excellant chapter, I like Nodika's use of Haruna's artifact in combination with her own and how she got Kaede fighting her own Kagebushin. Another good part is Nodoka's battle of wits with Ku Fei (an unarmed person) and how Konoka ended up beating Baka Yellow. I also like every ones reaction to Haruna's decleration of celibration and what Kotaro read in Nodoka's artifact.

This is a pretty good chapter, i like that Konoka and Setsuba as well as Evangeline opted out of the tournament. Another good part is how Galin defeated Haruna and that Asuna won both her matches. I also like how Yue defeated both Mei and Takane, although i'd have rather seen Asuna Vs Takane.
However this chapter has a major error, Evangeline is only about Four to six hundred years old while Rome abandoned Brittan over sixteen hundred years ago.