Very good :D

Ah! Rosalie enraged; how delicious. Usually I love stories of the sympathetic Rose and hate the ones about Rosalie mean or Rosalie self-absorbed.

You've done something different: you made her mean and self-absorbed, unapologetically so, and DELIGHTFUL! Great stuff!

I love how you presented Rosalie. It's exactly the way she'd react to Edward. I liked. = D

HA!
Stupid, charmingly handsome, egotistical pig! I’d show him.
LOVE THAT LAST LINE!
actually love the whole thing.
You're really good at writing from Rose.
I really think that you captured her perfectaly
thanks for writing and posting this short.

now get back to Bitemarks and Bloodstains!! :D

~AE~

It was really amusing! I don't see a lot of fics from Rosalie's point of view but I must say that I can imagine her being that vain and throwing a tantrum. "Not only had Edward Cullen failed to recognize me, grovel at my feet, and beg for my hand in marriage within ten minutes of knowing me, but he was drawing the attention of the people who usually admired me!" Hilarious. Continue writing!

HAHAHAHAHA That was BRILLIANT!! Thats all that needs to be said. Made me laugh. I think you captured Rosalie very well.

LOVE

Great story!

This is one of the most original ideas I have ever read on I am absolutely blown away! I especially like the part where Edward was reading her mind, but she didn't know it. Very amusing! The only thing I found out of place was some of the dialogue. I don't think Carlisle would have said he wasn't "big" on drinking. It just doesn't sound like the vocabulary of the time period. Please keep writing!

I am literally rolling on the floor laughing. This may not have been meant to be funny, but I find Rosalie's reactions so ironic, considering what happens. This story was awesome! You have Rosalie down pat. She's great, but not as great as you...
Keep it up!

WOW! really nicely done! u had the drama laid out very nicely- a little thick in some parts, tho that just enhanced the story and made it a good read ^-^ i am loving the detail u put into the outfits they were wearing/what the characters looked like/etc. all in all, it was just very very well done.

Great story.

I have a question though... out of honest curiousity, I was wondering where ever did you get the name Gwendolyn for Rosalie's mother? Its a very peculiar name. Lovely, but peculiar all the same.

That was great. I loved Rose's little hissy fit.

I absolutely adored this! It was wonderful, and very much like Rosalie. I loved the parts about Helen and her mother being intelligent because of the compliments they paid Rose; they were definitely funny.
Amazing job!

nice job. you don't see a lot of fanfics about rosalie's human life, and the few that there are tend to be very OOC. yours is great though, i think you got her character down nicely.