Oh my god! This was so great. I love how realistic it is. So perfect! Great short story for any couple, but especially as a SasuNaru. I want to know more, but I also love where you end it. And then order you put it in really works -starting out with the kiss and the consequences, and then going back to what happened before and giving more insight into their lives. Very nicely done. :D

Hahahah!! I'd like to see a sequel to this--preferably in the same style. It's funny and the awkwardness is done well.

i loved it, it was great

I love the idea of Sasuke exclaiming to his salad. Although Sasuke giggling is a little unrealistic it was otherwise cute. I'd like to see a part 2 *hint hint*

oo oo i hope u rite more on this its good. i like ur stle of writing and the story line is great! u gotta rite more