Lovely fic!

jack brushing his teeth..who would have thought that was erotic

This is really beautiful. I like seeing the human side of Jack!

This is good stuff! I think you could really expand this nicely. Love seeing such nice interaction - with the benefits of decent writing voice and the characters being realisticaly themselves, not bad copies!

Aw! This is sweet. And I laughed at Jack's pink toothbrush

Aw!

I loved that. Ianto beating Jack at chess and then Jack being all romantic.

::sigh::

I is a happy girl.

That was really cute. And the first chapter was amusing.

aw. i wike fwuff.

"Hell, he had barely heard Ianto laugh at all. This was like a scientific discovery. Jack found that he rather liked it."

How adorable! Good stuff. Supplied some very interesting mental images...

Aw, cute. Especially the last line. It's nice to see Jack being 'humanized' and not just the heroic aloft figure who rescues the day and manages to live amongst a group of people freely in mystery.

too, too cute. man, i want more. lol. loved it. :3

Great work. :D

Very nice story!

Beautiful. *wipes eyes* Yes, so human. Thank you for the real pleasure :-)

Even though I'm not a huge IantoJac supporter {{More of like Owne x Jack}} I still love this.
Nicely done!