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| whatmaybe 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha...hilarious...gil grissom stumped by first grade homework...haha..loved it |
| xoxoPAUxoxo 2007-10-31 ch 1,  | abusePoor Grissom! Great story Jess, I'm sorry I'm late reviewing, but RL got in the way. Any way I'm delivering babies now, so I've seen how women in labor get... Believe me NOT. PRETTY. Thanks for sharing! |
| inonolimits00 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseOOMGAWD so cute i loved it to death it was so funny im in a coffee shop and people are just staring at me cause im like laughing out loud lol wonderful! :D loved the fact that grissom cant do first grade homework (*cough SMARTASS cough*) loved her apologie :P -zoey |
| lamcsi 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseCute story. I really liked it. |
| BrookeGreene 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseNote to self; if I don't laugh the first time, read it over until I do, cuz there was probably something wrong with your brain the first time. Love that you snuck the goats in there, even though it's not even part of the assumptions/swoon or fail series. Although, I guess it could be, isn't Sara pregnant in Swoon or Fail? Wow, I forgot, that means you need to update real soon so I won't forget everything else about it. ;) Getting back on topic... She maimed him! That's great, I could SO see her doing that. Don't know what else to say... I like when they fight, but in a way that you can't help but burst out laughing. Like in F&J, that kind of fighting. |
| devilssmile666 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseaww, so cute! I can just picture this whole thing!!:) Great job! |
| NM42 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseHi-larious. This was awesome, as any other GSR baby is. But I dont think that I have read somethin like this yet! A review for you, hell, anyday! |
| luv0817 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha! That was SO adorable; I LOVED it! |
| SeattleGraceHospital 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAw...its fics like these that make me wonder how people can hate GSR, and *gulp* want Sara dead? Thanks for posting! -Ellie |
| RenLissa 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseDrabble + Comedy + Fluff + goats = great entertainment on a long weekend. I also love that Grissom was having trouble helping his son with the homework. You obviously need morw than a PhD to figure out some of those grade one questions. LOL. |
| eleen 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAw...that's so cute! The opening was great, I'm reading and thinking: what the hell is going on? Wow, you can fit goats into anything! I loved Sara's little Rant/apology, very amusing. |
| LielieS 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is so typical for you, making the beginning like something different (it sure looked like it!) and then the end with something directing to the beginning (the pinking bending thing).. Very well done, I loved it! Good job as always Jess ;) |
| shortie990 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusecute! |
| Wander52 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseThis story had me chuckling at the end of it...great to see a story started in the here and now and finishing with a look in the future...thanks for it. |
| The Smoose 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseHa ha nice one mate! Awesome! |