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| SuperKatyDid 2007-12-31 ch 12,  | abusegreat story |
| Rayla-R.L.A. 2007-12-01 ch 12, | abuseHello! At first, I want to say that I really like your story —I love it, it's so sweet! Your writing style is simple but good, and the characters look actually charming. I like it so much that I'd like to translate it to Spanish, if you don't mind. What do you think? (I'll send you a personal message to make sure that you receive this request). I haven't read the sequel yet, but I'll do it soon and I'm sure that it will be great, like this fic. Byes! Good luck! =) P.S.: Pardon me for my English; I'm Spanish, and...well, I usually do a lot of mistakes. I hope you understood me. |
| Alexandria J 2007-11-24 ch 12, | abuseAww man...what kind of an ending was that. I can't believe this...I was getting into the story. There had better be a sequel...or else... |
| Em43 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusereally good. |
| Aechigo 2007-11-13 ch 12, | abuseThat was good, nice job. XD Loving it. Let the JxA reign on forevr! ~Write On!!~ ~~Aechigo~~ |
| zedd113 2007-11-10 ch 12, | abuseVery nice ending. -NMH |
| almostinsane 2007-11-10 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapters! This was awesome! Thanks so much for writing this story! I loved it! God bless! |
| alex-della-robbia 2007-11-10 ch 12, | abuseThis was such a good story, but is that the end and if it is you should definitely make a sequel. I think you should write another using anyabar1987 's idea where odds family finds out about aelita. |
| yumified 2007-11-09 ch 12, | abuseThat was reslly nice! Such a simple way to end it. No cliffhangers or anything. Thanks for updating so soon! |
| Cdc100 2007-11-09 ch 12, | abuseU should make a sequel! |
| Tetsu Deinonychus 2007-11-09 ch 12, | abuseWhat a wonderful epilogue. It wraps everything up nicely. And, I loved that Odd got to see the embarrassing photos of both couples! Thank you, for writing this! I really enjoyed reading it! ^_^ |
| anyabar1987 2007-11-09 ch 12, | abusegood job! is that the end of the story? I enjoyed it and mybe you could write another where odds family find out about Aelita and some how accept her lack of aging without totally telling about what has happened to her. |
| yumified 2007-11-07 ch 11, | abuseThat was a really nice and sweet way to end their holiday. I am now wondering how you're going to continue with this fic. Hope you can update soon! |
| Aechigo 2007-11-07 ch 11, | abuseThey're SOO cute together!! I mean, seriously, when someone says 'perfect couple' you just like automatically think Jeremie and Aelita! XD Yay! Lol. Nice job on the story, BTW. The only constructive critisizm I could give you would be t watch your gramar and spelling a little more. XD Good Job. ~Write On!!~ ~~Aechigo~~ |
| anyabar1987 2007-11-07 ch 11, | abusegood chapter hmm they are back at school wonder what aelita is gonna think about Odds news. |