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Ikaru Sentinal
2008-09-03
ch 1,
abuseOh...I cried during this chapter...sheesh. *shakes head* Very angsty. But not too much. And it was not hard for me to follow at all. I feel depressed now, but it was not hard to follow. And I knew the moment a partner was mentioned that it would be Deidara. *laughs* This will be GOOD...but it is so sad everyone is dead...it has been a rough 8 years...sheesh. Wow.
Ryuuzaki-chan008
2008-09-01
ch 15,
abuseNU! EVERYONE'S DEAD! Aw, I was so sad when I read that you killed off Naruto, Sasuke, Kakashi, and practically every main character in the freaking show. But still, I loved the story! Yay! (Starts cheering incessently) Good work!!
And btw, if Kisame eats fish, doesn't that make him a cannibal? Or however the heck you spell it? lolz
-Angel
aolia
2008-08-28
ch 15,
abuseI loved the story, very good character developement. I personally think that the story could have been even better had you had more plot twists and sub arcs. Otherwise, it was very well written and i loved it alot =)
OCQueen
2008-08-27
ch 15,
abuseI absolutely adore this story, and the one you wrote before it! I'm kind of annoyed they had a child and lived tgether for six years without marriage, and even though you wrote they didn't need vows or anything to be sure of each other's love,and that was actually why NOT getting married was better, apparently, it seems wrong to me. It's your story, though, so obviously you should keep it however you want.
happymarshmellows
2008-08-24
ch 1,
abusei know this is a review for the first chapter but i have to say...
Perception and Silver Lining are THE MOST AMAZING BOOKS I"VE EVER READ!
i could barely stop to write a review!
and i've just finished them both and i have to say again.. WOW. there are no words to descibe how amazing your writing is.
the entire time i had painted images running through my head, so crazily vivid i couldn't tear my eyes away!!
Tsukikage-chi
2008-08-22
ch 15,
abuseThis story was so beautifully writen, once again great job. This one actually made me cry and i congratulate you for that 'cause it takes a lot for me to show that kind of emotion. Please keep up the wonderful work, you are an amazing writer.
Lydia
2008-08-22
ch 15, anon.
abuseI tihnk I need a man-sized box of tissues... You write so beautifully and bring out the emoions, and I can't listen to people that lose things, so this really did bring alot of tears to my eyes. Keep writing :] You're amazing. I would have paid to read this, and still would if I wanted t re-read it and it was published. You're amazing.
SakuraMomoko
2008-08-21
ch 15,
abuseI loved your artwork for this story. It was very well done. I enjoyed the ending with Sakura at the memorial stone so much so I had a good cry over it. Your character development is as wonderful as it was in perception. You did an amazing job and deserve some ramen too!
Deidara-Ani-chan
2008-08-14
ch 15,
abuseOMFG!! I just spent two ours reading the entire Perception and Silver Lining, and i have to say, they were some of the best fanfics i ever read. You did an EXCELLENT job, keep it up!
Valbino
2008-08-10
ch 15,
abuseI, in my nitpicky-everything-should-make-sense manner, actually enjoyed this happy ending.

;D

But my major nitpick about this fic is Sakura seemed very...sue-ish.

I think it was interesting to combine Deidara's volatile and fluid nature with ...for 'lack of a better phrase/word'...a desire to finally settle down.

But I think that the image that uncontrollably goes through my head is Deidara with the whole white-house-white-picket-fence and a bunch of little blonde/pink haired kids running around him.

[LOL.]

That aside, I felt almost that both characters were unintentionally twisted to fit the image you wrought. And not necessarily in a good way. But I liked it nonetheless. 8D

3.75/5 stars roughly. 8D;;

-val.
QuietRiver
2008-08-07
ch 15,
abuseOh my god, it's so frickin good, I can't even put it into words! I'm...like, CRYING! It was so good! I LOVE IT! In the beginning, with Kisame's retirement house, I was like, "GET YOUR ASS OVER TO KISAME'S!" It was so awesomely awesome! But I felt bad that everyone...NO SPOILING. But, it seemed necessary for the story, so I won't comment about it. DEISAKU IS CUTE!
Bittersweet Coffee Bean
2008-08-07
ch 1,
abuse"learning to live again" that gives me hope :)
Shadowsakura321
2008-08-06
ch 15,
abuseabsolutely amazing.
April
2008-07-31
ch 15, anon.
abuseAmazing story. It's taken me a week or so to get through Perception and Silver Lining because I don't have much time to read, but I'm really glad I did. You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!
tcl7189
2008-07-31
ch 15,
abuseGreat great great...uhm did i mention GREAT!
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