 Jamie310 2009-11-26 . chapter 15Really wonderful chapter made me cry(*) |
 Jamie310 2009-11-23 . chapter 1That one was a tearjerker but good(*) |
 ShannonFAYGOCHICK 2009-11-15 . chapter 15that was awesome.
i don't really know what else to say:)
well off to spend another countless hours reading more of your fics. |
 ShannonFAYGOCHICK 2009-11-12 . chapter 3well i am definitely liking where this is going, gawd i lobe your writing.
damn i must got to bed (damn work in the morning)so i need to stop there for now . |
 madaraxsharingan 2009-11-07 . chapter 11Yey Kisame is back!! Hahaha I could so see someone giving Deidara the nickname 'pretty boy' :D
Great chapter!! |
 madaraxsharingan 2009-11-07 . chapter 7There's alot happening under the surface ;) hahaha cute :P
They are so hot together!
But how did you not cry when writing all the sad bits? Especially chapter 1!
Anyway, amazing story, great style and don't ever stop writing! |
 chronosthirteen 2009-11-07 . chapter 4Aww, that's so cute!! Deidara and Sakura. Perfect. Kinda angsty at the beginning and almost everyone died, but it's great! You write so well, I envy you. Well, can't wait to read the rest of this story! |
 DotsOnAWall 2009-10-23 . chapter 15Oh my god, you keep making me cry! I hate it that everyone died, but I am glad that Sakura and Deidara got their happy ending. I supposed that's all most people want out of life, and I think you portrayed it beautifuly in this fic. Even though I just read them and basically read both Perception and Silver Lining today, I am sad to see them go. However I'll deffinatly be looking forward to your future stories.
dotty |
 DotsOnAWall 2009-10-23 . chapter 1At least you say the story isn't as depressing as this chapter. I was like, wow. And then I also cried. You make thing believeable. Which is good.
Dotty |
 puppyeyes135 2009-10-12 . chapter 15Amazing story... :'D I loved it! |
 fierynightangel 2009-10-11 . chapter 15wow. just as good as the first. damn, you're good! |
 Sakamotou Hadekiri 2009-10-03 . chapter 15aw...my...GAWD!! this was the coolest thing EVAR! ...i didn't like deisaku at the start, with Perceptions, but now... I'm freaking obsessed!!
Love your work!
~kiri~ |
 xx.false-deception 2009-09-17 . chapter 15Wow. So I finally finished reading this, haha. After I finished reading Perception, I immediately started reading this one, but I let it sit open in my tabs for weeks because I didn't want it to end. I can't emphasize enough how great this story is. The first few chapters were so filled with tension, and I think the way Sakura was forced to seclude herself after everything that had happened over the years was rather convincing. Whereas I loved Sakura being with Itachi in Perception, I knew it would inevitably end as a tragedy. I'm really glad that she got her happy ending here in Silver Lining. =)
I have to say that the sheer amount of sex was rather amusing, haha. I'm not complaining, though. I always knew Deidara's extra mouths would come in handy. XD
To be honest, I was expecting some major plot twist and more than one near-death experience. I dunno, just the way you built up the suspense and stuff led me to believe this. I found that the amount of information you provided the reader was perfect. Not too much to become over-detailed and boring, and not too little to become confusing. You allow just enough room for the reader to fill in with their own imagination. Also, the way you paced everything out allowed for the reader to understand and connect with the characters, which I found to be the best part of the story. I was always hanging off the edge of my seat while reading.
The overall story was impossibly touching. The bittersweet feelings portrayed through Sakura in the epilogue almost made my cry. Reading about Toshio and Kazuki definitely pulled some strings in my heart, and it finally hit me that both Naruto and Sasuke are dead. It would've been amazing to read about how the kids grew up, but I guess I'll just have to use my own imagination for that.
Their daughter, Kaya, sounds really beautiful. And judging from your artwork, she is. It would've been nice if they had another child that got Sakura's pink hair, though. (It's sort of her trademark, after all.) My first thought upon reading that she attached herself to the ceiling was, "...And she's only three? Impossible." But then I thought about Itachi and possibly even Kakashi, and it made a bit more sense. And since I just skimmed the epilogue again looking for something to say...I definitely have to repeat how sad it was. I'm really glad that Sakura learned to move on and that Deidara seems content living in Konoha, and how everything seems at peace for the time being.
Thank you for writing and completing this.
`xx.false-deception |
 Cebellina 2009-09-03 . chapter 15Beautifully written!
I throughly enjoy your writing style and will definately be adding you to my favorites :)
I'll have to check out what other stories you have.
Thanks for writing this. It was wonderful to read! |
 Sparkli-Vampire 2009-08-30 . chapter 1 NYA~!! YOU KEELED NARUTO AND SASUKE AND KAKASHI AND SAI! WHY?!?!??! T.T I couldn't stop crying!!
But, I'm an utter sucker of DeiSaku<3 So, the story line in getting her to meet up with him is good. - Thumbs up.; |