YES HEATHER I FINALLY READ IT! NOW GET OFF MY BACK \

Yesss, first one to review this old old story! :D Only real problem is some plot elements, which I know with her experience now she could fix, a corny part or two, but it gives good laughing measure _ and grammer, which anyone who knows the author of this story knows she's ALWAYS had a problem with. x_x

Well, for the time you wrote it at, it's not too bad, just been outdated, that's all.

It's nothing amazing, publishing-material, or whatnot, but it is a decent story for those who can close their eyes an imagine instead of relying souly upon typed words, it's pretty good... and it leaves for good comparison of past abilities to current ones... XD

Zeero Yui (the one who wanted to read this story so long ago and never got around to it XD)

PS: Just to make you feel good, the main reason I read it now is because I needed to see Joshipine's (pronounce Josephine, Heather's always been known for great spelling... *coughcough*) personality, for my story :D Baibai now _