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Fan Fan Girl
2008-06-13
ch 6,
abuseUpdate, WENCH!

(Couldn't help it...)

Anyways, this is an awesome idea and I'm so jealous that you came up with it. XD I love reading the interactions between the characters, especially all the little battles for leadership between Kalas and Sagi, but I don't think Kalas would be THAT much of a bully... Ah well...

Keep it up!
The-3-Sueslayers
2008-04-21
ch 6,
abuseLOL. "you have a MOUTH?" So true... Except... if Guillo wanted to eat somebody, I think she'd find a way to.

oh... mystery...

PUT UP THE NEXT ONE!
Roy-Chibi
2008-04-20
ch 6,
abuseI think Guillo does need a new vocab too XD

And I also have a hunch about his reflection too! :3 mwahaha *evil laughter; crickets chirp* well anyways.

Nice to see and read a good update chapter! I was on the edge of my seat. And the mangus, I can tell is responding to Marno-boy in my opinion. X3

but yeah, me and perhaps the rest of your watchers/readers/viewers will be waiting for chappy 7. :3
An Angel With Clipped Wings
2008-04-20
ch 6,
abuseYay, you updated! Some parts in this made me laugh! And what are you doing to Sagi!?
Please update soon! =D this story is getting better and better! =D
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2008-04-19
ch 6,
abusehahaha! I love how you and guillo go at it 'cause it's realy funny.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2008-04-04
ch 5,
abuseAwesome story. On a side note you might be able to include Guillo because in the "Secret Ending" of BKO Sagi saved Guillo's head and at the end I think the eyes were lit and with Mizuti's help (Since she is as powerful as the ones who made the godcrafts in the first place) "The Great Dingbat" could rise again!
Roy-Chibi
2008-03-19
ch 5,
abusehahah. This story like almost makes my dreams come to life. XD I had a very similar dream that Sagi and Milly somehow were teleported to twenty years ahead and met up with EWLO's cast XD XD

awesome... I love this.
Well duh, Sagi and Milly should be like Lv 99 or something... XD Like one hit and all the monsters are dead... even when they get really far. It's like "yawn" poof! dead XD

Anyways, keep writing. I really like how this is going, seriously~! *puts this story on alert* :3
Adriannu255
2008-03-05
ch 5,
abuseHeheh! Everyones reactions to Sagi and Milly are so funny! It's a relief to be reading something this funny, it's what I need to put me in a good mood. Please, update soon.
The-3-Sueslayers
2008-02-26
ch 5,
abuseHaha... Ladekahn's gonna have some sort of seisure. XD

Well, anyway! Great as always! By the way... what's oyakoness? Is it like friendship/family cheeze?

You know, Guillo has other insults than 'wench'. There's bonehead, half-wit, stalker, blah blah blah blah... -goes on until Guillo and Milly, tired of listening to me, forget their differences for a moment to strangle me.-

me: ack! Well anyway, good as always! love it!
Deshwitat'slover
2008-02-26
ch 5,
abusegreat chapter
I wish Marno could get his own body.
Then he could tell Kalas exactly what he thinks of him. hehe
An Angel With Clipped Wings
2008-02-26
ch 5,
abuseYAY! You updated!
I love love love this chapter! Marno and Latara were hilarious! And Kalas was...well, just Kalas! =D
Great chapter, please update soon!

Oh yeah, there's one thing about this that REALLY annoying.
The dialouge is cut. It's hard to read and VERY

ANNOYING. Like what you said at the end, it was like this.

Damn you

Gibari! It was like that. That's the only flaw to this. Otherwise, it's awesome! I hope no offense was taken as I just wanted to make a point. =D
TJdork
2008-02-25
ch 5,
abuseYay! Update! XD And plenty of laughs with it. I loved Sagi and Milly's, "We're not holding back! Not at all!" moment, especially since it makes a lot sense. YES for Gibari (almost, at least) calling him Kahn, that always ticked me off too XD. Same goes for Ladekahn calling Gibari Gib. And the rest of the chapter was hilarious, as usual. Thanks for the chapter! =D
Thaiis
2008-02-25
ch 5,
abuseAnother great chapter. :3 Their reactions never cease to amuse me. XD

And YESH. CALL HIM KAHN GOSHDARNIT. X_X
An Angel With Clipped Wings
2008-02-22
ch 4,
abuseAbout time they figured out. This chapter made me laugh my head off!
And...
I got that portait too but I never guessed...
holy shit, I guess you learn something new every day...
Great chapter overall! Can't wait until you update! =D
An Angel With Clipped Wings
2008-02-22
ch 3,
abuseWow..that was intense. Milly nearly gave them away! But I wonder WHEN Kalas and the others are going to find out? ...
hm...
Well, I'll just have to keep reading to find out! =D
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