Hey, this story's quite good...I think it's an interesting twist on Agrias' past, especially since most would think, "Ahh, just one of those average noble knights turned hero," but this certainly adds a dimension of humility, with Agrias having "commoner" origins. She sounds quite in-character, and I think it's a wonderful touch on Agrias. Please don't give up on this one yet! It's very well-written, and I would like to see Agrias make it out of "Hell's Heaven" and hopefully become a Holy Knight by the end of this story! Keep writing!

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Thought-provoking.

Compelling.

Terrific.

I love this story, it's awesome! This is the first Agrias fic I've read, I really love it. Plz write more, I'll be chacking back. ^_^

Kylara

You can update any time now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GAAAAHHH!!! The cliffhanger!!! It's killing me!!! Is it just my imagination, or do a lotta FFT fanfic authors like to torture Agrias? :-P

When're going to write more chapters!!!??? I'm going crazy!!!!!!! I'm so bored!!!!!!!!

When're ya going to wright the next chapter? Please let it be soon...............*sobs* I'm getting so bored.

I think it is great so far! But the fact the Agrias gets whiped and beat make me FURIOUS. Of course I'm a big Agrias fan so, that might be my problem.

oooooOOOOOooooo =0 it was good...very good

Wowzers. I really liked this story, and I do hope you continue with it! Pretty please with a cherry on top??? :-D

I've always wanted to tell you that Agrias was a butterfly's name, but forgot...oh well. Yeah! new chapter!! My heart nearly stopped when I saw "chapter 4!" What is Tom doing to Agrias!!?? Oooo..poor Agrias-chan. But it seems like Tom has his reasons. Livelivelive and be a goodgoodgood Holy Knight!!
Thank you for the dedication!!!! Ohohohohohoho!!!

Wow. That's the first and last word that flashes across my mind as I finished your second chapter. It's...uh...dammmit let me think...very emotional. Your characters are portrayed perfectly (from the cruel parents, to the noble knight) and the flow of the story is...(These are the times I wish I had a pocket thesaurus but I'll settle with) outstanding. I can't wait to finish the rest. (A little thing in my mind is still vaugly wondering whether or not Agrias was born into poverty...I wish it'd shut up as I don't wish to replay 30 hours of FFT just to find out)