I think this couple was the reason David had more than one wive, None of his wives where like Jonathan... Can't blame him.
I think this couple is kind off implied cause Davis did Kiss Jonathan in the Bible (on the cheek *Damn Homophobes*)

This was well-written. I especially liked the first half. The second half I felt may have been a little hurried and the end left me a little confused (perhaps that is my lack of ancient jewish culture, however). Still, I love the possibility of a love affair between these two. Who'd ever every thought I would have a good reason to read Bible slash? :D

That was weird, but kinda cool. I love David and Jonathan. I'm gay and I'm doing a project on homosexuality for history and we have to incorporate a ton of stuff and I'm using them as an example. Nice writing. Keep it up.

*after reading the comments*

xD yeah...the sex scene was weak...but thank you anyway!

what do you mean 3rd person? the dialog wasn't in 3rd person. they both spoke in 1st or 2nd person. =\ if you were talking about the narrator...well, that's how narrators work, deary. they use 3rd person. =_=

oh, and about the "christianity" comment...the bible isn't only for religious folk. personally, i'm agnostic... but i still read the bible. why do i read the bible? it's actually to use it against people who try to convert me. i don't like being told what to believe or now to. =_+

so yeah. this wasn't really a "M" rating. if anything, i'd say K+ for the homosexuality and suggestive hints. but definitely not a "M" =]

keep writing though~

I really really loved this! I believe your characterization of David and Jonathan was brilliant. I hope you write more of them in the future.

um...that was interesting i must say...umm arent christans against homosexuality?? i am not a christan but stil wondering!

im sorry i have to flame this. but that was so stupid! As if anyone would talk in 3rd person! Even back in those times they didnt! And that sex scene was weak!

Very nice; I am glad to see that there are still slashers in the bible section. Warms my heart, it dose ^_^

And I assume that the final comment about the bodies is taken from a bible verse? It through me for a bit of a loop.

Hope to see more from you soon.

oh interesting looks good cant wait for an update. ^_^