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| Bil 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like this view of that last scene. Actually, when I watched the episode I was annoyed at Sam for intruding on John, but now that I've read this I'm not annoyed anymore. I like the parallelism you've used between the two relationships. It's a really nice piece of writing. Thanks for sharing. |
| 7 League Boots 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseNice. Sam is captured very well, as is the despondent Sheppard. The story illustrated its title in the well done plot. Here's hoping John gets a happy ending, too. Kudos. I read this story in the "Elizabeth Weir Will Never Leave" C2 group. How nice to find stories like this in one place! |
| Sunny2006 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad and sweet. I love the idea of Sam sharing her experiences with John...great job! |
| Anjirika 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSo good... love the added little bit. |
| macisgate 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I loved this story. |
| dreamer one 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseNice interpretation of that final scene. Thanks. |
| sb4ever 2007-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI wish the ending had been more like this than what was shown. John's pain at losing Elizabeth was glossed over to me with an air of light-heartedness, if that's the word. Always enjoy your writing. |