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Chey
2008-09-03
ch 16, anon.
abuseThis was a fantastic read, truly. I'm so happy Malachai and Jess ended up together. Hopefully Isaac and the others will get what's coming to them. Epilogue anyone?
SnuffSnuff
2008-08-20
ch 11,
abuseI hope you fare well in your troubles, and hope you update soon.
SkittleLuvr.x3
2008-08-11
ch 11,
abuseYAY! You're alive!! lol i like this story bunches, im waitin patiently for the rest hehe
SkittleLuvr.x3
2008-08-09
ch 10,
abusedude, you seriously need to update
Marina Barrett
2008-07-25
ch 9,
abuseFear of empty buildings? I remember hearing that was Kenophobia (I think?). I'm not sure, there are so many names these days for all these phobias. I personally love empty buildings, there's such a mystery about them.

So, Malachi and Jess? One minute, he's got his hands wrapped around her throat, the next their making out amidst her bleeding wrists...that's hot,LOL. Seriously, I love the way that you're touching on Malachi's conflicted emotions. It's interesting to know what's driving him.

Anyway, good chapter.
Name
2008-07-06
ch 10, anon.
abuseThis story is completely fantastic, and I've been trying to wait as patiently as I can, but it has been two months, and I was hoping for an update by now. I know I shouldn't bother you with something like this, but a lot of people (myself included) are desperate for an update. Please. You are a wonderous writer, and you display feelings and write events at the exact right moment so that I don't become bored. In fact, I haven't become bored at all, even though I've read this whole story around four times. I know, wierd. Anyway, I hope you update soon, for I semi-patiently await the next part to this wonderful fiction.
SnuffSnuff
2008-05-13
ch 10,
abuseQuestion: will this story ever be rated R (M)? It feels as though there's gonna be some hardcore sex.

Anyway, please take your time. I am surprised you double-posted, which makes up for your absence, and I had fun reading the two chapters. The one problem I am finding is how everyone is scared of Malachi. Usually, when people like Malachi bully others, there's always going to be some kind of mutiny. I wonder why that hasn't happened yet. That would've been an interesting twist, since I have yet to read where ANYONE does that to him, and giving Jess some more 'feelings' for him.

~Snuffie
Czarina15
2008-05-07
ch 10,
abuseYou don't need to apologize for being late. Everyone understands the stress that comes with school and actually having a life :)

Anyways, great job. Your portrayal of Malachai is beyond interesting; I love reading about him the most. Your grammar, as always, is impeccable. I still can't really tell how the story is going to go. You've definitely caught my attention in that aspect.

Hope to see another chapter soon!
Anna
2008-05-06
ch 10, anon.
abuseThis is so good! you really have me hooked- i've been waiting for an update since the last one! i cant wait to see more MALACHAI action haha i want more.
understood about the finals though...that keeps you busy...but hey, summer is almost here!
KB Kerns
2008-04-21
ch 8,
abuseobsessed with this! keep it up!
SnuffSnuff
2008-03-24
ch 8,
abuseI was gonna say I credited you in this new COTC fic I reviewed, but since the writer deleted it in shame, I guess not.

This isn't a bad fic, certainly this was a very intersting chapter. I got tired of the lack of blood offerings that was common in stereotypical cults, so that's a point for you for slight originality. I mean, I've seen it in movies, but this is the first time I seen it in a story so well pulled off. Isaac just feels creepy here, and I was starting to miss that creep feel, instead of the typical, predictable feel I thought I was getting somewhere else.

Eternal Youth? That's new. I'm actually liking this fic. I can't wait to see the rebuttal.

~Snuffie
Marina Barrett
2008-03-21
ch 8,
abuseHm... Funny, I was just about to pick up Interview w/ the Vampire b/f I read this. Seriously, this was a great chapter, very imaginitive.

The more I read Issac's scenes, the more I wonder what sort of drugs his mother did while pregnant with him.

Your nod to romantic comedies was so fuuny b/c it was so true. If only I wasn't such a sucker for them.

Thanks for a great update. Please post again soon.
anna
2008-03-14
ch 8, anon.
abusewoot! ive been checking every day for an update i seriously have! and ive been thinking too that in like all the cotc fics there isnt an outlander that actually choosed or accepts to become a part of the cult...excuse me, religion...and ZING! heres a new update of The Sect and a chapter that suggests that it just might happen...
so keep updating!! hahahaha
Lieutenant Livi
2008-03-13
ch 8,
abuseGreat chapter!
SilverWings04
2008-03-13
ch 8,
abuseWow! this chapter explains a lot, and is extremely welcome considering there had not long ago been a rut of stories that all resembled eachother. Thankyou SO much for updating! I am already looking forward to the next chapter. By the way, I am also SurfAngel ;]
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