Aw, a very loving and sexy story.

i felt my body temperature rise as i was reading this. simply exquisite.

thank you.

This story is so beautiful. We always see how Shizuru cares for Natsuki. So it's nice to see it the other way around.

Please write more shiznat stories.

OMG, this was so... SHIZNAT-TASTIC! lol! Extremely cute. I love the beginning where Natsuki scares off the corals, ;) But the ending was perfect. Really well writen.

Leaving another review... er, going to try to anyway. :P
I remember sneaking off during one of my classes to print it out and then I read it later on in the day... during my government class. lol. I do pay attention to the lectures, really. Erm, it's just that I think anything that is related to you is much more important. :D
Hn, okay... the point of a review. Uhm... *taps the side of her head* Must not let my distracted mind take over completely. ... ...too late. >_>

wow, all your stories are just amazing. going to have to tag you as a fav author. will be expecting more great works from you. ^^

OMG...This is a great fan fiction. I love it! I delicate my first post here to you!

It is amazing how you put their emotional interaction with physical activities together!

Very, very beautiful; I wish more wrote this well and with such passion.

Most Satisfactory.

Your stories are always extemely well written =)

that..was just..wonderful.. T^T

very nice job! 8D

eh? Lol...Idk what to say, but somehow..hehe, I found one mistakes? not that it mattered, but i'll just point it out anyways..

if in this chap..they had "sex" o__o; doesn't that mean they're not a virgin no more? according to the plot in the anime Mai otome, People like Shizure and Natsuki can't lose their virginity. if I recall correctly that is. So maybe you can edit in the beginning about how they can lose it to the other himes alike? o__o; xDD idk idk, its just and idea though =P

m that was one fine lemon, i've read a lot in my days, and this one is nice and slow, not rushed at all like most lemons are...
plus you have Kruger and Viola pegged to boot...
i'd LOVE to see where Shizuru pays her back :3

great lemon. well written and not rushed. i think u could definitely make another one. this time with shizuru paying natuski back. and if you're interested i haven't seen too many good mikoto/mai stories. i'll bet u could make a good lemon with them.

Just stumbled across this on and wow, did I fall hard. That was fantastic, one of the best Kruger/Viola fics I've read. Thanks for posting it! I'm going to go change the fuses in my brain that blew when I read this...

die with full of happiness XD ..you so damn awesome!! is..so HOT