E this was an excellent story- all of the chapters were exciting and yu did a great job depicting the love and care of SE&JR- can't wait to read the next installment of the saga-

Great work! So glad you're posting here, too. :)

You're story just gets better and better...I love the relationship that is growing between Pam and SE...maybe together they can beat the Ewing brothers!

I also loved the scene with JR and SE and his relisation that he if he loved her he had to let her go...can't wait to see where this story goes...you've obviously had this story written for some time and I'm glad you finally plucked up the courage to put it online

Well done

I've read all the chapters of this story now and they're excellent, I love how you potray Sue Ellen's inner thoughts