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| The-Toilet-Ninja 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHey. I read your story some time ago actually. Wanted to get to doing things and reviewing, but...Well, no excuses. Anyways, hell ya. Someone else who is bold enough to pair Shina with my favorite psychopath ShenLong, and not the crybaby brother. |
| FireflyAFI 2005-03-29 ch 5, | abuseUpdate Now! Update Now! Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now!Update Now! Please ^-^ |
| cuu 2005-02-01 ch 5, | abuseWhoa, I had no idea you updated... great chapter, and that's what Shenlong gets :P hehe, stay away from Shina you horny freak! Your still a great writer to me so don't be so ** yourself. Please update! |
| Gery 2004-11-01 ch 5, | abuseThis is a really great story, I hope you put up the next chapter soon cause I cant wait to read the rest of it. ^.^ You really develop some brilliant story plots! |
| Silver Noise 2004-10-25 ch 5, | abuseFinally! I've been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for you to update this story. At first I figured that you would never continue but I was wrong. Thank you for this great continuation of this story. You're still as great as you were before so keep on going. Update as often as you can; after awhile I become impatient. Now to important stuff... I love the setting of this chapter and how it fit in with Shina's angry...uh... demeanor. I can't wait to see if Shina's gotten any good with the Kenpo style so, pick up on that as well. I don't expect you to take up my suggestion but, I would like to see some Uriko+Shina bonding. I've heard that a young person's smile can help decrease anger problems. Just a thought. It would be cool considering it's rare to see them alone together. |
| Silver Noise 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseYou must be dead or something. But I still like this. I've read it a couple times and I still like it. I wish on my soul that you would update. I might have to cry if you dont. ={ |
| Sonya 2004-01-23 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis story is starting to really good and I hope you right more on it. ^.^ Really hope you do. I mean the other chapters are good to but I wanna read and see what's gonna happen next. I bet it's gonna be cool. |
| Librarose 2004-01-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseHow come you won't continue? You were doing so good! I hope you continue... bye! |
| Kerigan 2003-06-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseO!! So cool!! I like this story so much! |
| Mandy 2002-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo when will you finish your damn story? When I turn 50! |
| Tiger5913 2001-09-17 ch 4, | abuseOH no... another Shenlong/Jane supporter? *cringe* Darn Beth for starting that trend... If I see more Loenny fans, I swear I'm gonna scream bloody murder. |
| Tiger5913 2001-09-17 ch 3, | abuseHurrah! Jang implications! Although.............the way you portrayed Uriko kinda scared the hell out of me. o.o; Geez, it's BRIII Uriko all over again... we really need more of her BRII self! Down with BRIII characters' personalities! |
| Fle 2001-09-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseCool!!! I hope there is more!!! |
| Kaldea Orchid 2001-08-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseYo, it's me again! Just found out you had two more chapters...and I didn't even notice! Shame on me. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading these two chapters and I can't wait to read more. I especially like how you kept in tune to the characters' personalities! |
| Final Ranma 2001-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abusePersonally I enjoyed the story, the dirty harriet refference caused me to end up laughing for a bit, I like the style used too, past tense, sort of someone retelling memories, all in all I'd give it a 4.5 out of 5 stars, keep writing dammit nee-chan, I want to read more! |