You are a genius!

Oh my god, that is such a perfect ending! I love it! I would favorite it but, my sister reads fanfic and she would see this on my list, read and then show it to mom and dad...bad! haha, so pretend favorting it! Very good!

That was awesome! I love how you can hear Claire's voice as you read it. I can see her in my head so clearly it is amazing! Never stop writing...I think I'd die if you did, or maybe the world would end...just kidding, but seriously, you have a real talent! Keep it up!

aww

that was sweet

too bad jacob imprinted on renesmee

P

I read this whole thing none stop. It was 2 in th morning and I simply had to keep reading. I read the whole thing and it was so beautifully written!

I read the whole thing, then read the first chapter again. It made me want to cry.

I'm Speechless.

this story is awesome good job

I cannot believe, reading this first entry, the depth of this story. It is a testament to your skill that you can write in the unassuming voice of a pre-teen and then very slowly develop that voice into the beautiful and sweet woman that Claire becomes.

And what restraint! If I wrote this first entry, it would have been 940 words, at least. Each word here effortlessly flows, but their very brevity belie the powerful punch that each word carries and echoes throughout the whole story.

Here's a challenge. Read the entire story, then reread this chapter. Yup, there's a lump in my throat. I just want to grab her in a tight hug and tell her that in more than seven years it's going to be better than she could imagine.

More than seven years? How did she make it? How will I make it through these chapters again?

Ugh! Beautiful. Brilliant.

geophf

Aw this story makes me all melty with how cute it is. I completely love it so far!

Aw... this was so adorable! I especially loved how Jacob imprinted on Quil and Claire's kid. Great job! And I really loved Sharon and how Claire aged as the story went on. :)

THIS IS EXCELLENT! September 4th was the absolute best of the chapter! I will have to remember that for my daughters bridal showers lol

*sobbing hopelessly* That was wonderful! Sorry for spaming you reviews page, but I just had to tell you my thoughts once in a while. It's too late to start the lemon chapter, I have to work tomorrow... Dang! (

That was cruel! to leave them like that, to leave us like that! I will so have to read the lemon-thing... (and I DON'T like lemon-things...)

That's -so- romantic, how sweet! I'm crying my eyes out here...

OMj i need the lemons plz...

OH! Steamy )