| Reviews for Dear Diary |
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prettypinkbookworm 10/6/07 . chapter 4I really like this story idea. Try and go into more detail though, and maybe try and illustrate more about how Claire feels about Quil. I'm thinking they're more than friends, since they're soul mates and all. Also, longer chapters would be nice. Maybe you could combine a couple entries per chapter. I'm so happy someone is writing things about the werewolves! |
toujoursmoi 10/6/07 . chapter 4this is such a cute idea! I really like it. |
kemolski 10/6/07 . chapter 4Please Keep Writing! |
Twilight Zephyr 10/6/07 . chapter 4The entries are a little short; but overall it is a cute story. Twilight. |
oflindentrees 10/6/07 . chapter 4i like this...alot. |
SparklyLovey 10/6/07 . chapter 4I like the idea of this story, but it would be better if more detail was put into it. It probably makes sense that she's so young and that's how much she writes, but still. |
fuckumish 10/6/07 . chapter 4I think your story is excellent! Update very soon. |
The Thrush That Can't Fly 10/6/07 . chapter 4It's good, but make her describe it in more detail. Try paragraphs instead of sentences. You should make her have a crush on Quil that is more than a crush. (You know, since they're sole mates) |
FutureCullen22 10/6/07 . chapter 4I really like this. I've been so curious about Claire and Quil's relationship so its cool to read an ff about it. Please write more! |
technogrl15 10/6/07 . chapter 4interesting... but try to make the entries longer... it would just seem better that way |
Atrophic Reality 10/6/07 . chapter 4This is a cute fic, and very original. :D Can't wait for your next update. *Mystic* |
littlegirlwolf 10/6/07 . chapter 4This is soo cool! It shorts...but hopefully we get to see more. I always wondered what would happen between them! |
ReaderRabid 10/6/07 . chapter 4love the new story! such a cool, new idea short review - my left hand is still having muscle spasms. ouch. |
hermionejeangrangerweasley 10/6/07 . chapter 4that was funny and awsome and amazing! i love it! oh! he should tell her a story! about the vampires and the werewolves and bella and say it's a fairy tale or something because it'd be SO AWSOME! that just popped into my head it to seconds. then i got excited because i for once said something other than i love this story and can't breath properly. i'm ok now! |
hermionejeangrangerweasley 10/6/07 . chapter 3that was so cute. i love this chapter. now i'm story happy. it's so wonderful! |