Reviews for Dear Diary
prettypinkbookworm 10/6/07 . chapter 4
I really like this story idea. Try and go into more detail though, and maybe try and illustrate more about how Claire feels about Quil. I'm thinking they're more than friends, since they're soul mates and all. Also, longer chapters would be nice. Maybe you could combine a couple entries per chapter. I'm so happy someone is writing things about the werewolves!
toujoursmoi 10/6/07 . chapter 4
this is such a cute idea! I really like it.
kemolski 10/6/07 . chapter 4
Please Keep Writing!
Twilight Zephyr 10/6/07 . chapter 4
The entries are a little short; but overall it is a cute story.

Twilight.
oflindentrees 10/6/07 . chapter 4
i like this...alot.
SparklyLovey 10/6/07 . chapter 4
I like the idea of this story, but it would be better if more detail was put into it. It probably makes sense that she's so young and that's how much she writes, but still.
fuckumish 10/6/07 . chapter 4
I think your story is excellent! Update very soon.
The Thrush That Can't Fly 10/6/07 . chapter 4
It's good, but make her describe it in more detail. Try paragraphs instead of sentences. You should make her have a crush on Quil that is more than a crush. (You know, since they're sole mates)
FutureCullen22 10/6/07 . chapter 4
I really like this. I've been so curious about Claire and Quil's relationship so its cool to read an ff about it.

Please write more!
technogrl15 10/6/07 . chapter 4
interesting...

but try to make the entries longer...

it would just seem better that way
Atrophic Reality 10/6/07 . chapter 4
This is a cute fic, and very original. :D Can't wait for your next update.

*Mystic*
littlegirlwolf 10/6/07 . chapter 4
This is soo cool! It shorts...but hopefully we get to see more. I always wondered what would happen between them!
ReaderRabid 10/6/07 . chapter 4
love the new story! such a cool, new idea

short review - my left hand is still having muscle spasms. ouch.
hermionejeangrangerweasley 10/6/07 . chapter 4
that was funny and awsome and amazing! i love it! oh! he should tell her a story! about the vampires and the werewolves and bella and say it's a fairy tale or something because it'd be SO AWSOME! that just popped into my head it to seconds. then i got excited because i for once said something other than i love this story and can't breath properly. i'm ok now!
hermionejeangrangerweasley 10/6/07 . chapter 3
that was so cute. i love this chapter. now i'm story happy. it's so wonderful!
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