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-Yuna's Reincarnation-1
2009-10-16 . chapter 21
will cloud still get experimented on by hojo?
-Yuna's Reincarnation-1
2009-10-16 . chapter 22
please update soon
cmsjr123
2009-03-14 . chapter 22
This is a very good story.. is it dfone though
FaeTian
2008-09-12 . chapter 22
SQUE! OMG, the end was so cute and touching!! Great update! I look forward to reading more ^^
Nadiaaa
2008-09-06 . chapter 22
Aw my God!I love so much the clerith scenes in this fanfic,you can't imagine! =D
Your story is really awesome :D
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER
2008-08-25 . chapter 22
Glad to see ya updating.

Description is still top notch and i like the interaction between Cloud and Cid, it's a good substitute for Barret. I'm glad to see Cloud finally admitted his feelings out loud to our favorite flower girl, heh.

I hope to see you update sooner.
Hikari no miko
2008-02-24 . chapter 8
This is a great story! I was really excited about the new game that's coming out (featuring Zack) and this spin on the story is really great. Keep it up!
Manga-Fanatic
2008-02-06 . chapter 20
This is a really good story!
I wonder when Cloud is going to find out about Aerith's powers?
Will there be any side pairings in this story?
I can't wait 2C what happens next!
UPDATE SOON? Please!
-Manga-Fanatic
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER
2008-02-05 . chapter 20
Damn, i usually open up my favorite stories to see if they have been updated when i first log on and when i saw this one was updated a few days ago i nearly had a heart attack.

I'm am glad to see ya updating this. This is by far one of my favorite Cloud/Aeris fics.

Awesome description of Fort Condor as well as Cloud's feelings and mannerisms when he first awoke, when Aeris left and his way to deal with the pain of not seeing her.

Looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully it won't be three months til then. ;)
Nadiaaa
2008-02-02 . chapter 20
Thanks God!I thought u were never going to update! XD
Well this chapter just makes me wanna read a next one!
Nadiaaa
2007-11-11 . chapter 1
No new chapters?Aww snif!Plz don't tell me u gave this up!
Nadiaaa
2007-11-07 . chapter 19
Aww Aeris is very cute!can't wait till Cloud wakes up!can't wait till the next chapter!:D
Raftina
2007-11-06 . chapter 19
Yeah, I agree with Aeris, it has been a long day. Waking up at the crack of dawn, traveling on Choco, fighting a Zolom,and getting Cloud to safety.(whew!)

Well, happy to see that Aeris realized how important Cloud is. I think Cloud doesn't even realize how selfless he is, but hey, that's what makes him so cute^^
FaeTian
2007-11-05 . chapter 19
Nice. This chapter was very sweet.
Update soon!
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER
2007-11-04 . chapter 18
Great story. Haven't read an FFVII fic in ages.

Description is very vivid and detailed enough to paint whatever it is you want to get across to the reader. Normally, writers write a very good description of their characters early on in the story when introducing them but as the story goes on, the writer gets complacent and the description lags. Good job on avoiding this.

The dialogue in the story flows very well and is believable between Cloud and Aeris. Wouldn't expect her to throw herself at him on the first night they slept together, though i would support it, lol. ;p

I look forward to your next update, keep up the good work.
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