 -Yuna's Reincarnation-1 2009-10-16 . chapter 21will cloud still get experimented on by hojo? |
 -Yuna's Reincarnation-1 2009-10-16 . chapter 22please update soon |
 cmsjr123 2009-03-14 . chapter 22This is a very good story.. is it dfone though |
 FaeTian 2008-09-12 . chapter 22SQUE! OMG, the end was so cute and touching!! Great update! I look forward to reading more ^^ |
 Nadiaaa 2008-09-06 . chapter 22Aw my God!I love so much the clerith scenes in this fanfic,you can't imagine! =D
Your story is really awesome :D |
 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2008-08-25 . chapter 22Glad to see ya updating.
Description is still top notch and i like the interaction between Cloud and Cid, it's a good substitute for Barret. I'm glad to see Cloud finally admitted his feelings out loud to our favorite flower girl, heh.
I hope to see you update sooner. |
 Hikari no miko 2008-02-24 . chapter 8This is a great story! I was really excited about the new game that's coming out (featuring Zack) and this spin on the story is really great. Keep it up! |
 Manga-Fanatic 2008-02-06 . chapter 20This is a really good story!
I wonder when Cloud is going to find out about Aerith's powers?
Will there be any side pairings in this story?
I can't wait 2C what happens next!
UPDATE SOON? Please!
-Manga-Fanatic |
 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2008-02-05 . chapter 20Damn, i usually open up my favorite stories to see if they have been updated when i first log on and when i saw this one was updated a few days ago i nearly had a heart attack.
I'm am glad to see ya updating this. This is by far one of my favorite Cloud/Aeris fics.
Awesome description of Fort Condor as well as Cloud's feelings and mannerisms when he first awoke, when Aeris left and his way to deal with the pain of not seeing her.
Looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully it won't be three months til then. ;) |
 Nadiaaa 2008-02-02 . chapter 20Thanks God!I thought u were never going to update! XD
Well this chapter just makes me wanna read a next one! |
 Nadiaaa 2007-11-11 . chapter 1No new chapters?Aww snif!Plz don't tell me u gave this up! |
 Nadiaaa 2007-11-07 . chapter 19Aww Aeris is very cute!can't wait till Cloud wakes up!can't wait till the next chapter!:D |
 Raftina 2007-11-06 . chapter 19Yeah, I agree with Aeris, it has been a long day. Waking up at the crack of dawn, traveling on Choco, fighting a Zolom,and getting Cloud to safety.(whew!)
Well, happy to see that Aeris realized how important Cloud is. I think Cloud doesn't even realize how selfless he is, but hey, that's what makes him so cute^^ |
 FaeTian 2007-11-05 . chapter 19Nice. This chapter was very sweet.
Update soon! |
 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2007-11-04 . chapter 18Great story. Haven't read an FFVII fic in ages.
Description is very vivid and detailed enough to paint whatever it is you want to get across to the reader. Normally, writers write a very good description of their characters early on in the story when introducing them but as the story goes on, the writer gets complacent and the description lags. Good job on avoiding this.
The dialogue in the story flows very well and is believable between Cloud and Aeris. Wouldn't expect her to throw herself at him on the first night they slept together, though i would support it, lol. ;p
I look forward to your next update, keep up the good work. |