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Sakae Doragon
2008-10-02
ch 5,
abuseWOW! I can't believe I finally finished reading. Yesterday night I started reading the first "The True Identity" story and I just had to catch up to where you were, although I am a little sad since I'll have to wait for the next chapter. I LOVE this story and I love the Cedric/Harmony pairing, I never thought about this pair being together, but you're right; he IS CUTE AND... he's starting in the Twilight movie as Edward Cullen (I can't wait!). And you know another thing I can't wait for, the next chapter to this story so please, please UPDATE SOON!
Torns-no-Kitsune
2008-09-07
ch 5,
abuseMORE! this series is just getting really good! you need to add the next chapter when you get the time until then I'm reading it over and over and over again...It is just too good not to. Not many people write with Harry being a girl, as he should have been, I mean he was an over emotional git in some of the books who pushed his friends away.
lily-jane-potter
2008-07-13
ch 5,
abusemore please
Amiterasu
2008-07-11
ch 5, anon.
abuseI can't wait for the next chapter! This story is one of the best fanfictions I've read (and I've read ALOT of fanfictions)! May your plot bunnies come in millions!! ^^
cocogirl198
2008-06-22
ch 5,
abusewow O.O ur stories r like...relly good keep it up!
;P
silvermoonlight
2008-06-21
ch 5, anon.
abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY/SERIES SO FAR. And i'd love to find out how it ends. Sorry for the rant. I'm just not a very patient person, and it feels like this waiting is killing me. Again, sorry for the rant. And i look forward to future updates.
Thanks
a.little.help.from.my.frien...
2008-04-25
ch 5,
abuseomg!! I LOVE THIS STORY! AH! teehee... sorry... Mwahahah... please please x 1,0,0 update soon!
XxHyper ChildxX
2008-04-21
ch 5,
abuseok.i like snape a WHOLE lot more now!
Light Lord Cybergate
2008-03-29
ch 5,
abuseAh...I've reached the end (so far)...

I've been reading your story since book one and I must say you have one of the best Harry as girl stories out there.

I must admit that the main reason for this and the main reason why I'm reading this story above all others is mainly because your writing through all of the books not just one. Only a completely original story can beat that...and they are very rare.

So, keep up the great work...well done I'll be waiting and reading :)

I really like the Cedric/Harmony relationship...(sound like music to me..Harmony, sweet harmony!) and I can hardly wait to see any post Hogwarts stories should you choose to write them...I'd love to see Harmony's children...but then again its up to you...just know that if you write one I'll be there to read it.

If you ask me, there aren't enough post Hogwarts stories out there with Harry/Harmony's children (and none where Harry's a girl)
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If I may make a few suggestions for the story:

(1) why not make Rita Skeeter turn into her bug form and have someone step on her (accidentally of course )...would a fitting death...right?

(2) As for Umbitch ...If you ask me then the Centaurs were too easy on her...I won't settle for anything less than Askaban (at the very least...though a life time sentence in St Mungus might be better...personally I'd love to see the Dementors kiss, put then again, that would be too quick for her...why not use a special spell which makes her relive her worst memories over and over...and over...and over...again...(Oh and for goodness sake SACK FUDGE!...just do me a favour and humiliate him first ok..Thanks.. (personally, seeing him run naked through Diagon allay would be just right ...I'd pay to see that... lol
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Anyway... great story...on to the next chapter...

Regs,

-LLC
moonlight
2008-03-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseWILL YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SON!
I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND THE WAITING IS KILLING ME!
Great work!
NIGHTSHADE
2008-03-07
ch 5, anon.
abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! UPDATE SON!
I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORIES SO FAR AND I'D REALLY LIKE TO SEE HOW IT ENDS.
aGAIN WONDERFUL JOB!
w
2008-03-04
ch 5, anon.
abuseGreat job!1 Please please please please keep writing. And mabey write a part six?
SilverSkulblaka
2008-02-29
ch 5,
abuseY'know, I've decided I like this better than the real books. It's kept my fave characters alive... And also you're a very talented writer! And I know what you mean about school... Although I'm in Year 8 (I'm 13) I'm doing my Spanish GCSE next year and I'm getting C's and D's. Which is bad for me and my pc time.
SilverSkulblaka
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseThis story is brilliant! I've read the other years, and I'd just like to say that I am sure many peple who've read this will be slapping their foreheads saying 'why didn't I think of that?'
gibby
2008-02-27
ch 5, anon.
abuseI agree with the reviewer who said they liked Harmony better than Harry. Harmony is way cooler and funner and this is awesome coming from a girl's POV. I found this story by accident yesterday, the 26th, and went to your pro so I could read the others, had to do my homework, and then started the series today at 2:30 when I came home from school. (If you're 3 hrs behind New England you would still have been in school) I loved it! All of them are great, and you've given Snape a chance to be nice, which is a chance JKR should have given him. For more nice Snape-ness I suggest The Name is Potter-Black! by PadyandMoony. (not sure if it's one or two d's) It's pretty good and she's (i think it's a she) is writing the sequel now.

But yeah This is a great story and I look forward to finishing this series. May I request that you continue that story about Lily not being dead anymore? It was getting good and I hate when good stories are abandoned :(. Keep up the good work! I look forward to an update soon, but if ur still in AP History and can't find time i understand. Five of my friends are in AP this year, and my class has five kids that dropped down to Honors by Halloween.

Bye!

This is my longest review ever! My username is gibby101, and i might add you to favorites whenever i feel like logging in :p!

Bye for real!
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