so you think jack and little red riding hood (haha, jill, very clever) had a thing in the play too huh!? hooray!

This is a very well written story! I nearly cried in the Prologue, Part One, when you mentioned the Baker's Wife.

And I love the name you gave Red! I was wondering who Jill was and then Jack said that she faced the Giant and I was like, "OMG HEY!"

Part Two of the Prologue is a little confusing though...

I love the combination of characters and the references to their own stories. So, Jill is from "Jack and Jill" and "Little Red Riding Hood", Jack is from "Jack and the Beanstalk", that jumping rhyme, and "Jack and Jill", and Goldilocks is from, well, Goldilocks.

-random moment of realizing something- Oh! It's "Beanstalk" Jack and "Little Red" after "Into the Woods"! Along with all their other stories. Haha, that took me a while. It's very clever!

But...they didn't come back? What happened? (Did Jack 'break is crown'?) And what will happen to Goldilocks?

I'm glad to see this story updated! It's really interesting. Please update again soon!

I really want to see what happens now...especially with the baker's son and Robin. The Aladdin part was unexpected, but very interesting! You're really good with details and descriptions, too.
Keep on writing, you're really good!

Very good so far! I'm intriguied to see where you're going to go with this, tho I wonder if we're going to see more of the characters from the musical.