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| TwiliAnn16 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseVery sad and happy. But i loved this story and i loved the book also. :D |
| Angela Loves. 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was completely sad. I see it as a real ending for Avalon High, but Meg Cabot seems to be a "happy" author, if you will, and I don't think she'll write that kind of ending. But thank goodness you did! It was so sad when she died, and it was amazing how descriptive it was that I could see the things that are happening. Great job! |
| Sophie-Anne 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOmg! That was so sad! And I loved the ending! |
| xXPhilippineSunshineXx 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was good! I teared up for parts of it, but I'm glad to know that they got back together! Great job |
| luvableangela 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was a nice story, sad in the beginning but otherwisw A very nice story |
| FuturePrincess 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI loved this ending. It was really cute although a little confusing. Good job =) |
| Mandi449 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI don't like it. |
| Black.Purple.Roses 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abusethat was a tragic but amazing way to end the story. |
| softballchica12 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really good different ending. I really liked it. It felt like I was still reading the story. Again, really good. *softballchica12* |
| secretlycullen1212 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseomg! that was amazing i loved it |
| penprincesswrite123 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseohmigod! that's so sad! poor elle,i can't believe she had to die! |
| merlinwizard13 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abusethis was deep my mind was wrapped in it i felt like i was living it i've never read avalon high but if i did im sure u made the ending better. : ) |
| Space-Case-Writer13 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseaw...I love Elle And Will I think they're a cute couple. I like this ending it's sad but I like it. Happy Writing Space-Case-Writer13 |
| Gothic Girl 3000 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseAW! |
| angel unseen 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseOk I postively LOVED IT...at first I was like no Elle died then when you said that will had a wife and children I was like wow...and then when he said that no one had maintained his heart for long including his wife that the only girl who had was Elle I was like aw...and then when he was with Elle again I was like I LOVE this story! |