I love this story as it progressing you are doing an excellent job. I love the fact the you added Vala into the story it is great.

Dude, cool chapters! I really like your story...Especially cos I think the show should have been like this *sigh* Great writing!

yup hard choice to make :)

Yay! You finally updated. I love these three chapters. Hey, when is John and Elizabeth are going to be married? Are you still going to do your alternate version with Elizabeth in your stories with the new Alantis movie once it comes out? Anyway I'm still a fan of this story and I understand of about overload of work because I have that same problem too with my schoolwork. Great job and I hope you can update soon. I'm looking forward to the other chapters. Again GREAT JOB!

yay *happy* three chapters at once :D

Very nice, liked them :) *happy*

but did you really have to bring Vaala along?^^*doesn't like her*

I finally got to read the new chapter. Why did you have to kill off Katie (I liked her). I HATE Keller, she sucks. Thank god you have Keller demoted and have Carson back as CMO. Anyway wonderful chapter. Please please please update ASAP.

great story :) had to get rid of katie huh lol :)

A very good chapter! Thanks alot for updating! And sorry that I missed 2 chapter :P. Anyway please keep up the good work! :D

Great story!! Interesting how you fit the epy in!

that's greaat! to let john dream the stuff in 'ghost in the machine' *grin*

lookin forward to more ;)
the episode was kind of nice to see what happened... but the end was so sad :( that John could let that happen to her... oh well

see you ur next chapter *g*

ok so that was an intresting twist on ghost in the machines episode :)

WOW! Love it. What a nightmare, now John has an idea what could've been if Elizabeth had never been rescued, *hugs John* Now they have an idea to turn Elizabeth human again, should be interesting. Can't wait until the next update!

A very good chapter, and I like the new name! Please keep up the good work!

Good story.

yeahh! No woolsey! I love you! *hugz* I hate him ~,~

Anyway, nice chapter and nice getting Liz back into command. Also well done her takeing Woolseys part. You've shown quite well how she takes things different from woolsey(like the briefing!) so go on like that :) *desperately waiting*