Reviews for Final Fantasy XII, The Complete Tale

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Ogro 2008-10-12 ch 71,	abuseLol, amazing two chapters after a long gap. The witty banter between the characters is IC and amusing. I love it. Can't wait to get to Giruvegan!
heaven-monument 2008-10-12 ch 71,	abuseYAY. You updated! Um, yes, an enjoyable read as always, but a depressing lack of flow between chapters. (A friend of mine on this site in the Avatar: The Last Airbender fandom hates me for using "flow" as criticism. XD) By flow, I mean in-story time between chapters. It's been, what, SIX chapters and not even two days of the story has passed. Yes, the Basch/Ashe scene was necessary, but I don't think it required a seperate chapter. The final emotional farewell to Rasler and Raminas was well done, though. In conclusion, I think you might want to hurry it up a bit... but the quality has not dropped. ^^ ~HM
Sky-Pirate325 2008-10-11 ch 71,	abuseAww, poor Basch. They're all against him. xDD
Sky-Pirate325 2008-10-11 ch 70,	abuseThat explanation with the rings was cool. It never even crossed my mind to use something like that. Nice work! =D
Cranberries 2008-10-11 ch 70,	abuseYAY! their together again!
Cranberries 2008-08-27 ch 65,	abuseOkay, the whole thing that happened between Simone and Balthier reminds me of the song 'Hand Of Sorrow' by Within Temptation.
854439 2008-07-30 ch 69,	abuse^-^ Me likey. It just keeps getting better and better! Update whenever possible, please! ^-^
darthdrew1704 2008-07-29 ch 69,	abusedude i like this story man, it's most excellent even, I do hope you update again soon, darth
Milkchocolateluver 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abusewow this is along story and i just began reading it, when i got 2 the bottom i checked how many chapters there were i was happy 2 see alot, but it will take a loonngg time to read:P considering ive played this game through i will agree with u on the ending i will also say it is way diffrent that the other FF endings. it was ... normal :P . ( i thought the FF 8 ending was the weirdest... wow this is like 1 of my longest reviews...) well i like this story so far ... is it just me or when u can say the dialoug by heart u need a new game?(AKA me) i just have 1 major set back... i need a new system Keep up the nice job:P
Xascul 2008-07-09 ch 69,	abuseThis is very good, i was wondering when you'd incorporate this, i like this explanation, very detailed and believable, fills the wholes nicely as well
Osafune 2008-06-28 ch 1,	abuseYour stories great. I just wish you could have started from where the game started. I would really have loved to see that in written form.
Ardentine 2008-06-18 ch 69,	abuseI've been enjoying the last few chapters about the flashbacks. You are really holding up to what you are doing by thoroughly exploring the dang holes Square Enix left with the history of Basch and Ashe! It's great to read the whys and whats in some characters! :) I can't for the next one!
Ogro 2008-06-12 ch 69,	abuseWow. What an ending. Filled with emotion - Ashe's grief and feeling of betrayal. Don't know why I'm speaking in fragments. Ahem, Anyway, great chapter. As always, your memory scenes are perfectly placed in the story. Now, it's perfectly understandable why Ashe hates the Empire and hated Basch so much (well, it was before, but now moreso). It explains the precious few amount of Dalmascan soldiers in the beginning of the game. I liked the small mention of Reks, too, even though you didn't say his name. Damn Vossler. Who knew he was a traitor even this far back? With all this, it's perfectly believable that Basch killed the king and the rest of the squadron. Again, great chapter. Can't wait for the next.
Sky-Pirate325 2008-06-12 ch 69,	abuse-sniffle- These flashbacks are making me go all teary. T-T Poor Ashe... Poor Basch...
serenbach 2008-06-12 ch 69,	abuseOoh, these last two chapters were really good. I like the flashback way of describing what happened. I love the way you portray the relationship between my two favourite characters! :)

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