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Rifugio
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Loved it. Very dark, I hope you continue soon.
HatakeHinata
2009-03-15 . chapter 6
Wow
yotada
2008-08-29 . chapter 6
THis is story is Dark. and I like!

I especially enjoy the Sanji parts (since he is my favorite character and all)

i know i'm mean all for saying this, but i really hope that Sanji gets molested in one way or another (i enjoy seeing him suffer)
nonoji
2008-05-10 . chapter 6
My god, Please,please please keep writing! this is one of my favourites ever!The setting, their characters, the darkness of it all... I love it.I know I wrote a review already but I really want to know how you finish this. Please do not torture me.
Turtle Kid
2008-04-29 . chapter 6
I keep thinking, "How sweet," when reading this story, which is weird because it's not really a sweet kind of story. . . .

Ah well.

At any rate, I love the characterizations!
nonoji
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
My God, this story's great!! Please, please, PLEASE keep writing!
But you probably know that its fantastic already with all the rave reviews you should be getting.
So! What I wanted to ask you is, if you have the time,can you please read the second chapter of my first fanfic so I can hopefully have your blessing? You see, I couldn't help being influenced by the 'Sanji in the bar' scene that you had,and as I was writing,the bar scene in my story became similar... If you think I'm a loser copy-cat, I'll take it off and re-do it but I would jump up in joy if I could get a reply.
By the way, usually japanese people use a renge or a spoon to eat fried rice.
EudaimonArisornae
2008-02-17 . chapter 6
I desperately hope you haven't given up on this story. I know I've gushed a lot about previous chapters, but if I haven't said it before--when I think of the best fics I've ever read, this is one of the first stories that pops into my head. As I was just checked to see if you updated recently, I realized that I never reviewed chapter 6. I think I was so excited to read it that I read it when I didn't have time to also write a proper review. I also feel like I have nothing new to say except this story is amazing. Please, please, please keep going with it. I understand that sometimes things come up that get in the way of writing, and I don't mind waiting forever to read the rest of this story. Just please don't stop!
Jombra
2008-02-05 . chapter 6
I was a little iffy about reading this, but it's starting to look really good. O_O
:D
Please continue working magic!
Fantushe
2008-02-04 . chapter 2
Hooray for unknown needle-injected drugs. ^_^
I'm really enjoying this story so far, you're a very good writer. I especially love the way you describe everything... It really puts me in the scene. I look forward to reading more, so keep up the good work! ^_^
~Fantushe
The Jenx
2008-01-19 . chapter 6
I enjoy this story way more than I want to admit. Why are there so few reviewers? Anyways. Um. I'm honestly not sure what to say about this fic, except that your writing is spectacular. You have done an amazing job of creating an image through actions, thoughts, and that sort of thing instead of through boring descriptions. The characters are, while darker than in the manga (DUH), very in character. And it's deliciously twisted! =D
I think I liked chapter 3 the best, and the bit where Nami wakes up after being taken. The only thing I think I can complain about at all is the ZoroxSanji. I adore the pairing, but it came out of nowhere this time.
So, um, congrats. I don't even like One Piece, really, and you've made it on my favourites list. *facepalm* Shame on me, kudos to you, please update.
Espion Four
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
Really, you write beautifully. I honestly think this story isn't getting all the review it deserves. Just the first CH but you've already done a magnificent job of drawing out the characters personality.

I'm not a big ZOXNA fan but you do an excellent job of portraying their interaction.
the.old.amsterdams
2007-12-12 . chapter 6
I wasn't expecting this story at all when I read the summary, so I'm pleasantly surprised. It really does paint a dark world. A little too much in the name of pleasure, er whatever. Anyway, though I get a little confused about chronology ever now and then, it sorts itself out in the end and I'm enjoying the read. Zoro's kiss WAS a bit surprising. You've got his character down pretty well I think, but since we didn't see a whole lot from his view prior to the kiss, it seemed a bit out of place or forced or something. Seeing him angry and possessive is not unlikely, but I was still a little put off for some reason.
littlepinkangel
2007-11-23 . chapter 6
Please write more, I love it!
Lady Geuna
2007-11-22 . chapter 6
!OH SHANP!

Geuna~
EudaimonArisornae
2007-11-07 . chapter 5
Oh, I'm so glad you're still working on this story. I don't know what to say other than thank you for another brilliant chapter. The scene where the fake Nami was naming off other fake crew members, and Sanji kicked her just as she was calling him Black Leg Sanji... I completely loved it. In fact, the idea that people on this sinful island are impersonating famous pirates for their own jollies is quite a fascinating concept. As always, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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