 Saotoshi 2008-06-02 . chapter 1Sao: SQUEE! SO CUTE!
Anni: Who'd he kiss? How can you say he kissed someone and then keep the identity of said person from us? WHAT KIND OF CRUEL PERSON ARE YOU?!
Sao: ...right...well! We enjoyed very much! Love Jack! ^_^
~Sao & Anni |
 escapesign 2008-01-31 . chapter 1Such a sweet story. I loved the whole pirate theme. Jack's hilarious lol |
 bonbonpich 2008-01-16 . chapter 1i like this so much, Riku being honest, confessing and crying his heart out. all the contrasting stuff insides of him were being shown here.
striking progress of story, and clear cut ending, just love it. |
 kuriqa 2007-11-13 . chapter 1this was... cute... to say the least... i liked it... just can't wait for you to be able to update chnces in life... really...
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 Faith Moon n Jade Sun 2007-11-11 . chapter 1AWESOME!
love it. |
 AbnormallyWeirdPerson 2007-10-15 . chapter 1WHEE PIRATES! :D
...I still like ninjas better though... -.-;
Anyway... how did they get the idea that the boys were getting married in the beginning? Did Jack or somebody confuse things and then insist on celebrating with rum? ...Well, only Jack would probably insist on celebrating with rum. (With the KH kids too young to drink, Elizabeth almost firmly against alcohol of any sort, and Will whipped to the end of the world and back.)
I have to say though, I'm curious about who Riku kissed, too... Was it Ansem? I'll bet so--the creepy child-molester.
Or maybe DiZ. I have my suspicions.
And Jack really needs to find a whore and stick with her. He'd still have a just-sexual relationship, and he wouldn't get slapped so many times.
I'll be honest, I was surprised Jack could still count how many fingers he'd had up with all the alcohol he consumed.
But then again, you build a tolerancy, so... *shrugs* Oh well.
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Sora giggled nervously, his face already turning a little pink from the alcohol. “Uhm, I have never…uh, stolen something from someone.”
“Liar,” Riku muttered before tipping his cup back against his lips.
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Ok, as soon as I read that, I thought: "AWW! Sora stole Riku's heart! X3" (Yes, the emoticon was included in the thought process. =P)
HAHA! I LOVED Riku's excuses for why Kairi couldn't come in the room! XD "I'm naked!" "What?" "He threw up over himself, so he had to take off his clothes. Um... we'll be a bit!"
They might as well have told Kairi the truth. She probably would've figured it out, anyway with those sort of excuses. 'Course, since she's had alcohol, it might take a little longer, but...
The only thing that made me sad was that Riku confessed when he was drunk--heck, when both of them were intoxicated, but it was still cute. =3 And it made me smile.
Anyway, adorable oneshot! I'm sure RainbowSerenity loved it! ^^ |
 Twilight Shadow 2007-10-12 . chapter 1YAY! Awesome pirate story! I don't think 'I Never' is a traditional drinking game, but it does seem like something Jack would do. If only to get one-up on everybody.
*laughs* Silly Riku, gettin' drunk like that. Nice touch. =D
Wait a minute...Who'd Riku kiss? ~When~ did Riku kiss? I thought he only hung out with old people and Heartless.(Ew.)I reeally(really, really) hope he didn't kiss any Heartless. Ansem's... okay, I guess, but he ~really~ needs to use a different tanning lotion.
You did a great job. I especially love Riku being 'nekkid'. Ha. Also, Sora is |
 black-n-white-stockings 2007-10-10 . chapter 1I think MY heart just melted...*squee*
This is just...the cutest thing. :D Thank you for sharing it with all of us! |
 RainbowSerenity 2007-10-08 . chapter 1SQUEE!
Oh man, I was all set for a completely shoddy day until I checked my email earlier. ^_^ YOU ARE COMPLETELY FABULOUS IN EVERY WAY AND OMG CAPS LOCK AHOY! -evil laugh-
I can't even tell you how much I love this fic! *_* I'm so honored you wrote it even though you're swamped with homework. *glomp!* :3 (And by the way, my birthday was September 30. xDD)
Ehehe, I loved how Jack made everybody think Sora and Riku were getting married at the beginning. xD And man, I can actually picture Elizabeth getting all giggly and fangirly over that! Poor Will. xD
Oh man, this proves that drinking games can lead to madness. -falls over- See what you did, Jack!? Oh wait, why am I complaining? 8D
I LOVED this part:
Sora giggled nervously, his face already turning a little pink from the alcohol. “Uhm, I have never…uh, stolen something from someone.”
“Liar,” Riku muttered before tipping his cup back against his lips.
Sora glanced at him. “What?”
Tehehe, Sora, you've stolen his heart! Ah, hidden fluff. Fluff is good. Fluff makes the world go 'round. -evil laugh-
And that confession scene! OMGOMGOMG! -squeals- That bit is the only way I'd ever say yes to underage drinking! RIKU/SORA FOREVER, YO HO HO. 8D Ahem. xD
If you could tell already, I absolutely loved this and didn't hate certain symbols, I'd shower you in a billion zillion heart emoctions! :D But I guess I'll have to shower you with a billion zillion internet cookies instead. ;D *SHOWERS YOU IN COOKIES* Omnomnomn.
BUT YES. I LOVED THIS AND ILU OMGOMGOMG. :D :D :D You're so incredibly sweet for writing this for me and now I totally can't stop smiling. :D SQUEE! And more *GLOMP*s! :3
You are awesome and don't ever forget it. 8D
*-RainbowSerenity-*
Oh, and before I forget - did you ever get my PM with the link to the fanart? O: *flails* |
 YoukaiAnjiru 2007-10-08 . chapter 1Haha, that was awesome! I've never read a KH fic that had Captain Sparrow incorporated in it and you did it wonderfully! And with such an adorable ending~ :'D |
 Insomiak 2007-10-08 . chapter 1H'okay, I loved Sora's whole "distorted thought" possess. You know, lack on capital letters, punctuation, grammar? Loved it. Human thought isn't complete, right? Sentence fragments and all. And, "Sora tilted his head and waited, waited, and sure enough..." I liked the word "waited" repeated. M.
Oh, it all made my morning. Gave me a reason to ignore my Biology labs.
Thanks. |
 youkai chick supreme 2007-10-07 . chapter 1cute! i liked the parts with jack actually, i was expecting them to be quite bad honestly. but they were quite good! so yay! the ending was a little abrupt though... |
 EmoIshkabibble 2007-10-07 . chapter 1AHA! That was the funniest thing ever. Haha jack n' his drunken antics. But yes, that was very good. Very nice indeed. :3 Made my day! Keep up the good work ne! |
 crazy novelist-san 2007-10-07 . chapter 1frickin sweet. you are as always the bomb. ttyl girl! |
 Katraa 2007-10-07 . chapter 1I love you ;D and this made me love you even more. Oh man, that was amazing and funny and just so fluffy and nerggh. I squeaked so loudly, despite how tired I am. Much love to you dear. And I hope school goes well for you o.o School work should be baned so authors have time to write *rant* Anyhow! Loved it ;D
- katraa |
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