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| PaigeyLou 2008-08-30 ch 7,  | abuseoh my gosh! what happens next! i totally love this story. you know I am writing a story called Seeing Red but in that Dark Ace is the opposite. he would spare finns life never mind stand there and not attack aerrow! but really good! what happens next! plz post!"! |
| BlueSapphireGirl 2008-08-01 ch 8, | abuseE! You have to update! Please! Please please please please please! By the way, great job, love how it's coming. |
| Falconyx of the Black rocks 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuse“Finn, that means you.” |
| PaigeyLou 2008-07-26 ch 8, | abusewhere the hell is the next chapter? |
| tege 2008-07-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseWelcome back. Hope you can update more often, especially since you left it at DA's reappearance. Great fic. |
| Queenofshadows7 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuselol 'check your knuckles buddy!' |
| Aerrow4Eva 2008-07-25 ch 8, | abuseWOW! Yay the Dark Ace is alive!! you sure took your time on updating! next chapter up quickly please! and longer chapters, there isnt enough! !~A4E~! |
| Hermonthis 2008-05-24 ch 7, | abuseOh Nisha, it's been several months since you've updated this thing, but I still retain hope that you'll continue it. I normally go for stories with longer chapters, but here, I don't mind as much. The scenes contain the right amount of dialogue and action that it seems unnecessary to stretch it further. Love the action. Like the mystery. You definitely write Dark Ace mighty sexy, and Cyclonis is refreshingly badass. |
| Bouncefox 2008-04-05 ch 7, | abuseAh I like it. Keeps me guessing...a lot...particually about the Dark Ace. Yes I am fan of the Dark Ace. Okay I won't ramble...all in all really great story, description, grammer, and the backround info on the Strom Hawks really makes the story wonderful story! Excellent job! |
| dark 2008-03-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is good please update soon. |
| SH Aerrow's Girl 2008-02-09 ch 7, | abuseThat is a really good story so far. How do you come up with these!! They are brilliant, so HURRY UP with the next chapter lol. I cant wait, it really getting good x I hope Aerrow decides to join up with The Dark Ace and they battle together against the Gyrfalcons. I hope they become friends! lol |
| Charlotte (Aerrow's Girl) 2008-02-01 ch 7, anon. | abuseWOW! Cant wait to read the next chapter. I hope Aerrow finds The Dark Ace so they can both stop those Gyrfalcons and Scavengers x |
| Eldonyx 2008-01-26 ch 7, | abuseI like this story. Where is Dark Ace? Hiding somewhere while trying to come up with a plan to destroy his ennemy? Will the Storm Hawks find him soon? And Cyclonis? Will she team up with Piper again? And, the most important question is, will you update this story soon? |
| darkaces girl 2007-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate soon its good (i saw the DA photobucket icons ^_^ real men do wear pink thanks |
| NeoNix (unsignedinOo;) 2007-12-13 ch 7, anon. | abusePlease please please update! This looks so awesome! ^^ |