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| Saiori 2008-08-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseawsome story. A couple of grammer errors here and there but all in all pretty good, keep writing |
| gamersxtreme 2008-07-22 ch 9,  | abuselol ear plugs nice. please update soon this is a good story. if your thinking of pairing i vote for momo cause momo is cute. and cute and scary demon hallow shinigami hybrid go together. also you said Naruto trained for 50 years can he do any kido silently? and can he do Cero and other vizard skill or does he just use the mask? |
| Slayer End 2008-07-19 ch 9, | abuseK. So... what now? Will he try to slaughter Ichigo anytime soon? Or, will he end up helping to defeat Aizen? Well, I trust your judgement. The story has been pretty good so far, so, chapter 10 should be incredible! Very good story. |
| Kyuuki-sama 2008-07-11 ch 9, | abuseThe last thing in this capter (‘But first, I seriously need to consider getting some earplugs.’) was funny. I can't wait to read next chapter. C ya! |
| WinterClover 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuse“Naruto, I have a dream.” Okay I admit it I thought of the MartinLutherKing Jr. speech when I read that for like, half a millisecond xD |
| Catlady172 2008-06-19 ch 9, | abuseAwesome story please write the next chapter soon! |
| That Which Once Was 2008-06-18 ch 9, anon. | abuseYo I think Naruto and Ryuukitaka would make a great couple. Please consider it. |
| Dominican Kitsune 2008-06-17 ch 9, | abuseOmg!! What will happen next! I hope that you update soon so that I can find out! |
| Dominican Kitsune 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh man. What the villagers of Konoha did to Naruto was brutal beyond words. He was only eight... *cries* |
| Wirespeed91 2008-06-16 ch 9, | abusenice story. Good thing you starting writing it again, i like it, it would be a shame to see it go to waste, and i always do hate it when the author quits after just a few chapters. |
| FumetsuKaji 2008-06-12 ch 9, | abuseInteresting. I just found your story, and I love it! I cant wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon. |
| azad439 2008-06-07 ch 9, | abusethat was a good chapter but do try to update faster. that is if u r not too bz. |
| TheDon1023 2008-06-07 ch 9, | abusenice |
| TheUnrealInsomniac 2008-06-07 ch 9, | abuseHello there! I like the fic, it's one of my favourite BleachxNaruto crossovers, granted i've only read three others but hey details who needs them? I like the idea of Naruto being well generally kick ass, i like the plot twist of Aizen using Naruto its very clever and leads to some wonderful plot developments, my only dismay is that my two favourite current shinigami haven't appeared much or at all, but oh well at least Urahara has appeared! Yay Mr Hat and Clogs! Update soon TUI |
| SpeeDemon 2008-06-07 ch 9, | abuseWell that was intersting i have nothing to really say except thanks for finaliy updating. :);) |