Please, please, PLEASE UPDATE!

Now this is an interesting setup. I can't really say much more than that, though. The names obviously had a lot of time and research put into them. It's fun to see how "Tian Tian" becomes TenTen and "Li" becomes Lee. I'm curious if Cai and Fei will become known Naruto characters, ot original ones. I'm having trouble plaing them in the ninja world, so for now I'm assuming original characters.

This piece, being only one short chapter out of an obviously intended longer work, wasn't as great as your other Naruto fics. However, it was just a well written, and had a lot of thought put into it. Nicely done.

I have readed it over and over again, its simply so sweet. please continu soon

Lovely idea! Found this floating in chuunin, yes I did

I've always wanted to read something like this, so thank you! The concept is great- I love it so far! The characters, as always, are fantastic. You're so great at telling what everyone's personality is, and yet you don't give away too much. (On a side note, Tian Tian is my favorite character.)

Quite oddly, the ending was my favorite part. I read it over a few times, and I just love it to pieces. Not much to say, really- It's an amazing start, and all I can do is encourage you to write more! (If you don't, I'll find some way to punish you. I swear I will.) Great, great, awesome job!

interesting start, please continue

This idea is awesome. I've always thought of something like this, so to see someone actually going out and writing it is...yay!

Will the story follow canon or be an AU? Doesn't really matter either way, but I'm just wondering. Or will it even matter because the story won't actually get to their canon ages?