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starsandstuff
2008-07-18 . chapter 4
love this
Hiei's Cute Girl
2008-03-25 . chapter 4
Lovely chapter! Sakura really should have known that socially deprived fool would take her words the wrong way. XD It was hilarious.

Good luck on the makings of the next chapter!
oONatsuOo
2008-02-29 . chapter 3
I love this story! Sai is so funny. xD Update!
Saikaga
2008-02-14 . chapter 3
ah what is sakura
going to think when she wakes
up?
Hiei's Cute Girl
2008-01-25 . chapter 3
Oh wow, awesome story! I love it so far! Can't help but feel sorry for Sai. The four of them seem to get along just fine, but I guess in a tight group like theirs, you probably feel alone when the three of them are together.

Good luck on the makings of the next chapter!
Calise
2008-01-23 . chapter 3
good job
loved it
Calise
2008-01-22 . chapter 1
i love the first chapter
the first cahpter alone could a very sucessful one-shot!
Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona
2008-01-15 . chapter 3
PAMS(please add more soon)
Egghead
2008-01-15 . chapter 3
Not bad. Update soon
Cookies321
2007-12-11 . chapter 2
YES! HAHA I DIDNT REALLY THINK YOU WOULD CONTUINE IT. BUT YOU DID. AND FOR THAT I THANK YOU! I'll tell you one really good thinkg you had in chapter one, but didnt have here. The flashbacks I really liked those but oh well. thanks for updating love BYE!
Jarield
2007-11-22 . chapter 1
LOve the fic... Omg! The drama is intense, I felt it. Not exactly as I wanted it to be, But close..

For Comments..
OMG!! They are damn old! I would want to see this setting in their teenage year. Like, those are the most confused years of a person. So Sai has been that for more than five years. I know you want to make hi look very sympathetic, but the age. OMG! That bis retarded!

And also, so Sai is not a great shinobi. You almost make it sound that only the three of them are doing great. We all know sai is damn good. He wouldn't be sent to assasinating mission if his not.

And also, I lost some of the details at the end. There are few... Almost like you are rushing.. I would have preferred a much detailed "accepting thing" goin on.

Those are the things that made me uneasy.. But oh... You made me CRY..
Cookies321
2007-11-21 . chapter 1
Um I know this is only me, But my favorite couple is Sai and Sakura. And this a really good oneshot make a sequel. For me please? Promise I'll review it if ya do.
kishi.tenshi
2007-10-07 . chapter 1
I love this!

very touching!

almost found myself crying, though this one is not that dramatic!
I am Driven
2007-10-07 . chapter 1
Wonderful..! hEhE...
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