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| Lil Tanuki 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI'm not going to pretend to comprehend it all, truth be told I had to read it more than once to get the Time Twist at the end. x3 But I enjoyed reading this one shot. : ) Thank you. -Tanuki |
| blackbugs 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! It's real good. All the interactions and characterizations were great. All those references took me forever to catch, and I had to reread everything more than once to get it. To tell the truth, I didn't get the ending bit until my sister told me. The story was great fun to read. Thank you very much! |
| Aryn1 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully crafted peice. I thoroughly enjoyed every moment of it. Your sense of story-telling and characterization is just brilliant. I'll becoming back to read it over and over again. |
| Sydney Z. Hampshire 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseWow that's trippy, I can't profess to understand it all, but I certainly enjoyed it. |
| SilverInkblot 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abusewoha. That was seriously cool. Smooth, writing skills you.ve got there. Did you like research information on playing card history, or something? You seem to be well informed on the subject. |
| Naiyad 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseYou know, you deserve a lot more reviews and love than you receive. Amazing work as always. Everytime I read one of your stories I end up spending hours looking up stuff that you've mentioned. Two hours trying to understand the Shroe-something cat theory...which I still don't. Anyway, what I meant to say is that your stories aren't only interesting and well written. They're also very informative. =D I'm always looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing your brilliance with us. |
| Kiss of the Breeze 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abusewow. eerie and beautifully written. I love stories that can make a person think and if yours aren't some of the best then I'd love to see who's out ranking you. wonderfully done. |
| MidnightWhisper7 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably one of my favorite oneshots of yours. Demyx and Luxord are perfect to cat together, their identities clashing and cohering with each other seamlessly. Luxord's world is both a magical one and a logical one, and so interesting to learn about. I wonder at the reference to the Suicide King, though. I understand he symbolized Xemnas at one point, but as for the location of the card... Hmm. Fascinating storytelling. You really should be published someday. |
| Samurai-Nashie 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is where I would flail and simply be astounded by your characterization of the "master of the rhetoric." Though, in this case, I think the description should apply not only to the Organization's tenth member, but you as well. Simply marvelous. And the ending, which was both a question answered and unanswered, completes the circle. Fantastic. Beautiful. Bravisimo. - nashie |
| nupinoop296 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseNice. 8D |
| The Light's Refrain 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseHmm...was Luxord's "sister" really Chance? Demyx makes a good point, how so many people would be envious of their ability to travel anywhere, and yet they themselves can't appreciate it. I also liked the comment about the winf-up music box. Oh, and the and lyrics/doodles they were doing were funny. Had Luxord sent the card back in time, so that was why Demyx couldn't find it? |
| The Philosopher's Queen 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abusewow! This was so intricate and plain awesome. I loved it! All the way through i was screaming "time twist! time twist!" And then at the end...there it was! I take it thats what the wet ink implied? Poor Demyx. Bet he was confused lol. Ace story :) Shadow x |