Reviews for Pawns on the Board

Reviews For: Pawns on the Board

Lysimarchos 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseAnother brilliant Fan-fic congratulations. Kakashi seemed to fit naturally into the story; I felt engrossed in his plight. I don’t usually read stories of this sort but I think you have changed my mind. Brilliant, perhaps one of the best Fanfictions I have read.
Sesshomaru1257957 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was the best Naruto fanfic I`ve ever read. It gives many details on what happened and expains alot that I didn`t know. The way it is told is remarkable and original. It held emotions that most other stories read can not make you feel ( I`m not just saying that because I love Kakashi ). Just excellent! I cant think of much more to say than I definetly enjoyed it.
Gabwr 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseThis was very well written and intense. It almost had me in tears. Great work.
joyrid3 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseNow why did I start reading this for Christmas? T_T It's having me in absolute tears...and I'm not easily impressed by a story. It was very well written and intense, the story you made up for Rin's death was believable and...it was too much for me wipes tears Kakashi's totally in character and his feelings are so well described that I could feel each and everyone of them. Kudos!
Silverblade219 2007-12-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is so sad... Kakashi is so close to being about to save her, but then he loses her just like he lost everyone else...and her thinking that he is Obito just adds to the heartbreak Great story
allurement 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abuseThat was probably the most wonderful fic I've ever read. I have to admit, I was a bit discouraged when I first opened it up, what with its huge paragraphs and whatnot. But I tried, and I don't regret it at all. I loved how you showed a more human side to Kakashi - all the while keeping in character, which must have been extremely hard to do. So points to you ;] But most of all, I loved how you made Kakashi and Rin interact and how you established their relationship that went so much further than that of a crush and a teammate. How Kakashi was so protective of her, yet romantically uninterested at the same time and wanted to keep her safe and the same if only because she was all he had left, was so believable and heartbreaking, it makes me feel all emo now, but in a good way. And I'm gushing and all, but I loved this sososososo much and it turned me into a pile of mushy goo -reviews, favs and fangirls story-
Hikari Minamoto 2007-11-20 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is probably one of the saddest stories I've ever read. It was so beautiful - I felt incredibly hoepless after reading it (which is a compliment by the way)! Her death was so...perfectly orchestrated. Amazing job.
MikaSamu 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully written. So much pain and sorrow mixed with Kakashi's and Rin's dedication as shinobi. Kakashi comes so close to saving Rin that the pain of her loss is particularly intense. The symmetry in the paragraphs and the manner in which the story is told give it a wonderful feeling as if this were a legendary tale being told.
Rebellia 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseIt's quite good. I like the beginning better than the end, for some reason. It's a little more powerful, I think. You make the characters easy to identify with and they're all IN character. Nice job.
.0.-.Void.-.0. 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseVery well written and thought provoking. There was a few paragraphs that kinda though me off because it seemed to change from Rin's point of view to Kakashi's in the middle of a paragraph but besides from that, great story. Have you thought of writing a one-shot about Tsunami; even in the Canon her life is filled with hardship and angst.

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