Things were finally starting to get really good and then i see you haven't updated for almost 4 years.

Any chance on continuing this?

By the way, you should totally have Naruto and Hari meet after the war is over.

Cheers,

Wizco

I think this is my 4th review of this story... I think I already said it all... Anyway, please update...

So sad, I really wish you would update.

Aww... a sad love story... good thing I am not all that fond of OCs anyway :D

No, I am glad he gets back to Konoha.

What was this amazing, kami-given piece of literature? And why has it not been updated? A piece of platinum like this deserves to be finished, don't you think? I really really want more.

OH MY FUCKING GOD! I know you haven't updated in years, years but please, PLEASE UPDATE!

you can't just leave it on such a cliffy, Naruto can't die! And I love him with Hari and I even love Hari - because she is awesome! really charcter wise- completly not-mary-sue (if you know what i mean)...really a charcter that is realistic and suits this take on Naruto perfectly!

Oh god...don't leave me hanging! xD xD xD

Please update, PLEASE UPDATE! Think of Obito, the fluff, the parent bonding you could create, HAVE SOME MERCY ON THOSE THAT NEED YOUR STORY TO LIVE!...anyway UPDATE SOON!

Two questions:

First, couldn't Naruto bypass his healing by acquiring some hollow needles, poking one through his skin, and bleeding through the needle? This would allow him to bleed chakra enhanced blood, without the injury healing closed.

Second, now that Naruto is learning to control his healing ability, will he (eventually) be able to suppress it enough to get drunk from alcohol? Of course, once he gets too drunk (or passes out), he would likely lose control, and his healing ability would turn back on, sobering him up.

This is a really great story! I hope you come back to it someday!

Very nice! Probably a bit dead as a story, but I would not mind it being continued at some point.

This is a very good story. I think that you should make the two meet again near or after the end of the war. Wether they hook up or she dies is up to you. Also, Please update soon, this is an extremely good fanfiction with the espionoge and the beleiveable plot development.

Good Story.

Very high quality.

Thank you.

You’ve done an amazing job with this story. I’m really impressed and it’s definitely going to my favourites. It’s a bit of a... unique theme to it, which I like, and the characterisation is spot-on. If there’s something I don’t like it’s got to be typos and plot holes, I guess, but those are to be expected. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Cheers.

This is really interesting. Glad you finished the arc, or at least mostly.

I just wanted to say I really liked the spar.

I am liking it!