I agree with the points about the Midnight Sun leak, but I have to say I'm a bit depressed that you're not continuing. I think you're a really talented writer and it's a shame. At least keep writing fanfiction!

I get what you're saying about the name thing. I had this name when I was 12 that I was mad about and it was really special to me, and this girl I knew didn't steal the actual name, but she changed it very slighty then used it for everything. I mean, she WAS in love with me, sick child, but still. It stung.

Basically, I get it, and accept your renouncement.

Regards
Lemon

Aw That is sadder than I thought it would be! It is amazing, but so sad!

Beautiful, to say the least.
I really loved it.

its really good. please write more soon! it was too short!

Wow...
You are very great.
Poor Edward. I put it into my favorite list...

this is amazing.

that was so amazing! i loved it. you have a beautiful style of writing!

Really hope they get picked... they were amazing!

:3

Glitter glue makes everything better

Beautiful!

rather angst-y. BUT STILL LOVE IT!

This was a great beginning... I just hope Bella doesn't get really old... Anyways, hope to see another update soon!

Elven at Heart

AW! GREAT CHAPTER!

woah, that was excillent,
VERY well written and i think it
described what Edward was feeling at the time
perfectly. You're a really good writer, i liked it =]

This was really, really well-written. It also depressed me to a very large extent, but that also just shows that this was good. I think you really captured Edward's feelings.

Good job!

YoolieYick