omg i love it! How they are all conected. I love your samurai 7 fics. And i can't wait to read more
jess :)

5 sentences for each section, ending in the same motif. Nicely structured and flows like poetry.

Have more feedback but will PM it so as not to clutter your reviews page.

Oh my stars. Poignancy, thy name is Samuraiko. Well, you know how well I liked Kyuzo as a character, and that I, too, leant toward a tie between him and Nasami -- so you can imagine the little whirlwind of emotion that happened here when I read this. So much said in just a few words. I don't know for which character I feel the sorriest. Gad.

Rant over. Well done.