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Sailor Sunset
2009-11-01 . chapter 4
It's a pity you haven't updated. I love this story, and am interested in reading some future SasuFemNaru lurve XD
Lil-lo
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
This first chapter promises to be one of the best female Naruto fics I have ever read. Actually with the details you created about the Uzu, it promises to be one of the better fanfics period.
I like that you took an original concept that fits well with the world of Naruto. Your writing gives hints to a great back-story.
SleepyPuppy
2009-08-13 . chapter 4
slight confusing not explaining the whole story. hope to see the next ch soon
trsofnaruto
2009-06-14 . chapter 4
Wow this is a very interesting story you have developed here. Its exciting, i wonder what kind of blood line Naruto has, and why its so powerful that she has to be sealed :3 I can't wait to find out out, i can't wait for more reading.. Update soon and until next time X3
ennui deMorte
2009-06-12 . chapter 4
Excellent chapter! This story is very intriguing and I am looking forward to reading more~ ♥
A Bibliophile
2009-04-20 . chapter 4
Your whole backstory with the Uzumaki clan is intriguing. I can't wait to read more!
Harteramo
2009-04-20 . chapter 4
Looking foward to the next chapter keep up the good work and update when ya can XD!
apathetica
2009-04-20 . chapter 4
Er... are you ever going to explain what is so bad about being an uzumaki female?
I like this story- I hope you update soon.
Deritine
2009-02-06 . chapter 3
Hmm. Intriguing. I'm interested in what is going on with the clan thing, and I want more interaction with Sasuke. Or... more story in general. Hopefully your profile has some favorite fem!Naruto linked, because you have totally turned me on to the idea.
Deritine
2009-02-06 . chapter 2
I like the going over of the canon stuff with the new perspective. Not boring at all- well done in fact. There are a bunch of little things, like missing plurals and in once case a lack of verb in a sentence- but nothing that bothered me enough to note it specifically.
Silver Phoenix7
2009-01-04 . chapter 3
when are you gonna write more. i like this story so much
A Bibliophile
2009-01-02 . chapter 3
I am kind of hoping someone will find out causing Naruto to freak and make him/her swear undying secrecy in the matter. That someone preferably being Sasuke, Shikamaru, Kakashi, or Hinata.
Speaking of Hinata, how is Naruto going to keep her secret from the Hyuggas? They can see through clothes, you know. Wow, that sounds pervy...
A Bibliophile
2009-01-02 . chapter 2
Ah the wonderful wonders of that time of the month. Poor Naruto. The guys have it so easy in comparison...
Dragonmanga
2008-10-03 . chapter 3
I like this fic so far. I really like that you've kept Naruto in character ^^ Too many femNaru fics have this OC that people call Naruto. And you didn't change her name! It's just a pet peeve, but I get kinda annoyed when authors name famNaru something else beside Naruto...
That flashback thingy (Chapter 3) seemed just kinda randomly thrown in there, but it was really well written. I really like that fact that Kushina was having second thoughts on Minato, and it you continue with a back story, info on Takigakure would also be appreciated ^^
Very nice story. Update soon please! Pretty, pretty, pretty please?
sun-sun kat
2008-09-30 . chapter 3
what happened with the women of the uzumaki clan?? btw i love how kushina reminded me of a female version of Sasuke...almost...kinda. so when is the rest of team 7 going to find out that naruto is a girl?
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