plz update

Alright, I was beginning to think that your main characters was a Stue at first, but evidently I was proven wrong. However, you have a lot of grammar and sentence structure issues, especially with past tense.

"He was not use to it"

That's incorrect. 'Used' is the proper form. You also have spelling issues that could easily be remedied. Do you use a spell check? If not, I'd highly recomend it to you.

Your chracterization is very good, but your dialogue can be a little weak at times.

Sorry to hear about ur husband =( i hope he will be okay,
btw i am planning on making my first fic and i wondered if ya got some advice;)

BLACKDAWN! ^^ such a long time since i have seen ya update i almost lost faith in ya(slaps myself for not being more trustfull), i have read a little of the first chapter hopefully this 1 will be as good as ur other storys

from ya number 1 fan ME

btw plz update ur website :)

Awe, thanks for that Dawn. I was a little surprised that you used the Koine info, 'cause I don't think Tigris Daimonas is of the Koine language.

Now this was a really cool beginning, boy does Tigris have it rough, but I'm really looking forward to seeing what is next when they land for their hunt. I know you're going to have fun with that! Great work and keep it up!

I must say I loved reading this! I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the decent introductory chapter length. Please give us more. I so enjoyed this! More.