great story!

Aww so sad but Sweet. Tony had a hard ansd sad life at the hand s of his father. But the good was Cook and Nanny. They loved him.

And know he has Gibbs as a real dad. One he never had before.

good story

Tony is lucky to have Gibbs as a father figure.

Poor Tony. Happy ending.

Wow. Tony attacked him?

IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS GIBBS REMAINDERS ME OF MY UNCLE RON HE CAN BE NICE AS APPLE PIE BIT IF YOU DID ANY THING WRONG HE WAS LIKE A MAD MAN BUT HE TOUGH ME HOW TO ACT LIKE A YOUNG LADY SHOULD AND I DID GET MY BOTTOM WARMED MANNY TIMES THANKS

WOW IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS

Aw... the story is so nice i liked it :)

thanx :)

Oh goodness.

This got me sobbing.

I was so able to relate to Tony... I would have done the same thing he did to that bastard.

Bravo. :)

Awesome story!

That was great!

It was well written and it was a good story. One mistake you made though is that a Prologue is what is written before a story even begins in order to introduce said story; an Epilogue takes place after a story and tells of what happened after the story is done.

This is brilliant! I literally have tears in my eyes - I love the way you have used the whole case-that-brings-up-the-past thing to show us Tony's vulnerable side

wonderful story. just a hint prologue comes before epilogue comes after. great story thanks!