T_T why nanoha why? T_T

Words fail me.

but simply one of the best/saddest fics, I´ve ever read.

very good

Very good!
I love your work!


But did Nanoha have to die?

Anyway, still beautiful work

hey Eagle :P

this is a really nice fanfic!! I felt like crying but just when I wanted to start crying it was over :'( and yea.. Fate does indeed sing since her seiyuu is Nana Mizuki.. but I guess you already knew ^^; great fanfic.. now going to read another one of you :P

X NanoFate fan ^^

you made me cry.

That was beautiful ^^ I really liked the way you ended the story, great job !

I can't think of anything to say after reading this. It's a touching piece, and it's left me in something of a state of shock.

I really don't know what I can say. It's good. Very good.

It's also sad and nostalgic, and about a slow, quiet passing.

This is the type of story that doesn't make me cry right after reading it, but will draw tears when I think back on it, just because of how you've written it.

Well done.


It's a shame you aren't writing anymore, but all fanfiction authors stop at some point, and I suppose you reached yours. Good luck with whatever you're doing now.


-Tari

Heh, pretty incredible there. I got to reading Satashi's works and thought to see what her favorites were. I'm not one to dislike the genre this fits into if done well. Beyond that, I thought of a song that would fit this story pretty well. /Assemblage_23:Let_The_Wind_Erase_Me

"Let the wind erase me like a memory of a kiss" Assemblage 23. Keep up the great work and I hope to join in and write many nanoha fics in the coming months.

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I really don't know what to say to you. That was heart wrenching... Horribly angsty... but still really good. Something is so very wrong with that! D:

I think I have a love/hate thing going with your writing. *Shifty eyes* Why must you torment me?

Amazing job--regardless of the horrible, horrible depression you've caused--keep up the great work.

Once upon a time-- today, actually-- I was considering on writing a story based on the very same words you yourself considered. But as I read your story, the ideas for mine shattered in my mind.

It's mostly due to the way it was beautifully written, as were the emotions it stirred within me as I read on. As somewhat cliche as the story was, it worked incredibly well and I felt that you truly captured the general feel and character of everyone involved. My only complaint is that, in a way, the kiss(es) would bind Fate to herself as much as the words Nanoha may have spoken. Regardless, I definitely enjoyed the work.

Ah, so very tragic, yet in a beautiful way. Wonderfully done :)

I'm stunned. Beautyful. The thought of Nanoha dying doesn't sit well with me, even if it is accident, a serios injury, sickness or old age. But it's... inevitable.

Nice..

Word. Beautiful. *contented sigh*

Thanks for another great read. :)

Tragically beautiful. That's really all I can say.

...But damn, this did hurt.

"Takamachi Nanoha was someone who belonged to the sky.

And the sky had come to take her back."

One of the best quotes I have heard from the MGLN fandom. And very powerful in its meaning. Good work.