I like best how you portrayed Zidane with his discomfort in the room. It was good: not too fluffy, in character, the whole deal. Nice job.

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Nice oneshot. yay fluffness! XD

Thats a really sweet story, well done 5/5 (_)

Aw... I really liked this story. Very good.

Awsumness! I think you did a good job. Cuz personally, I always stick to writing FFVIII FFTactics fics cuz they're so much easier for me than FF9 fics. I'm such a loser! Anyways, great job!

This is good! i LOVE IT PLEASE CONTINUE! i found it funny to, I cracked up at the thought of Zidane and Garnet on the balcony halfdressed with a bunch of people staring at them.

that was good. keep it up.

hey Mark! This is a great fic! I love it. it's so cute!

HEH THIS IS A SWET STORY THAT IS VERY WELL DONE. THE WAY YOU HAVE CAPTURED THEMOMENTS. THE KISSES NTO SO DULL, YET PLAYFUL. ZIDANES EGO CAUGHT WITH PERCISION. THE LAST PART CERTAINLY HAD GIVEN AN EMOTIVE RESPONSE. I LIKE THIS A LOT. IT WOULD BE INTERESTING TO SEE WHT FERMENTS IN THIS WONDERFUL TALE OF LOVE AND ROMANCE.

That was great! Please write more!

really, really beautiful.

Aw...*smilez* dat wuz SSSOOOOOOOOO kawaii! i realy enjoyed this fic; it was written wonderfully and it had an awesome plot. excellent job!

Very touching fic. I like the idea of Zidane going crazy living in the castle - it's just like him. Good work!

Very Cute! I hope you add more to this soon! I hope Zidane does stay with her forever, though.

PLEASE WRITE MORE FAST!

That was damn cute, that's all I can really say about that. very very cute *_*