well, if it's any consolation, i really like this story. i'm sorry that it's not going where you want; i know how that is. if you do continue this, good luck, and if you don't, just know that i enjoyed reading it.

KYAA! I love this story! I especially love this elf one, and the one where Fai and Kuro-minx are little kids! U definetly need to update, since I just spent lyk two whole days of online time reading this amazing thing!^_^

Sure, sometimes it can become confusing when the next chapter is sort of unconnected...but it's very good.

My most favorite one though was the one where Kuro-ramen was a prince and fell in love with Fai(ugh...Yuui).

Speaking of which, what happend to Yuui(fai?)

UPDATE SOON PWEASE!^_^

I have to get off line in 4 minutes.

OMG! I totally am in love with this story... well all of the stories that make up this one story! I have been anxiously waiting an update. I know how it is to lose hope and hate your own writing. I am currently trying to get my KuroFai story up off the ground but it isn't turning out so well. Please continue with the story. It is amazing.

Perhaps you hate how this story is turning out, but I just wanted to say that I very much enjoyed it. I've especially enjoyed all the 'miniseries' in this long collection of fics, as well as the standalones too. Thanks for everything you wrote.

hip ...hola ...hello ...or whatever please continue ...keep going ,... move move I'm so freeking ...crazy waiting ... this chapter was so cool and its nothing like that one ... when KUrodaddy was a prince and faychan was a beggar ... conmon ...please ... I love al your fanfics ... I`'m so badly in love with your stories ... so I can't wait ...

hwaiting XD

Pitifully enough...I actually thought that a protostar was some kinda pun you made on protester...Well, it all worked out in the end. Anyways, this was a really nice change of pace from the other stories. (and Hideki appearances make me smile)

While I definitely agree with you on the topic of Tsubasa becoming more of a thing to read because the first bit was so captivating, I have to also admit that this story of yours is one of my favorites, out of all of the ones on this site.

I'm sorry to hear that writing it has become a sort of chore, but I just wanted to tell you that I'm completely in love with what you have written so far, and if you decide to keep writing chapters for it, I don't doubt that they'll still be wonderful to me. You're amazing at writing, it's very clear.

I don't get it. You always say that you are bad with humor and yet everytime you write Fei Wong Reed, I find myself laughing hysterically. Kyle was also quite humerous this chapter as well. ((Lucky evil villian...Gets a cookie...))

-applause- though it took me a couple days to read this (damn online homework) I thoroughly enjoyed it (big surprise). PLEASE don't give up on this story, it's so good! -thumbs up- I don't even care if you do my suggested story, the ending to this one would be good enough for me! ^^;

two favorite funny parts; 'either he insane, or he was in love with fay' (paraphrasing) and 'boneless cat'. the imagery in both of those made me bust out laughing. XD I even chuckled a little when I wrote it.

two favorite sad parts; the four paragraphs that made me cry a little and DIE INSIDE about kuro-högfolk's death, and fay telling his past. truly, these two things about did me in.
I love the way you're telling this story! don't give up! ^-^ you can do it! (btw, I don't know if I ever said it, but I love the mythology you enraptured into this story 83 one of my favorite parts of this~) looking forward to the next part!

Mirika-puppy-san

I feel your pain, love. I too am quickly losing interest in Tsubasa, they haven't shown Kurogane and Fai action in the past yera, and the last fe months have been re-iterating the same principles over and over again. It's tedious. Like you, I'm only reading it because I feel obligated, andI hav the hope that, maybe, just maybe, all this will be over soon and the ending won't be crap, like Wolf's Rain was... the type of ending that authors love and readers hate. It's like Naruto's current state - boring and drab.

As for your story, love, you're still doing a fantastic job! I have seen fanfiction kajsgfgo and this defintely does not qualify as that. To be able to continue such a difficult prompt that you have no interest in, but still write so beautifuly, and with so much cultural information and detail, shows true skill and determiination.

I've been writing a story that requires no research, who's prompt I love, and my heart is in it, yet I still haven't updated in almost a year, and it's nowhere near this quality.

Don't lose heart. Tsubasa will stop sucking. You will finish this story.
(D.Gray-Man has been getting me through Tsubasa's awkward phase)

See ya soon!
-SKF

Aw. I'm sad to hear that you're giving up on the fandom. If it makes you feel any better, I don't think it affected your writing! I can't wait for the next chapter of this story!

It really is sad that you feel that way about tsubasa and kurofay now, but you're not the only one.

I really love this miniseries to bits; I love Scandinavian mythology and fay has alwyas seemed elflike to me. His story is heartbreakingly appropriate for him. You write both characters exceptionally well and you didn't even need to make kurogane realise he loved fay for the readers to realise too.

I hope you hang in there, at least to finish the miniseries.

Um…sorry?

I do feel a bit responsible. I should have just stopped at “Elf”. If my request had been more generalized it might have been easier on you.

Regardless of what you think of it, however, I am honored to read it. The painstaking attention you’ve put into detail and history coupled with the incredibly emotional scenes from Fai’s past make this a very well-written story.

Perhaps the reason that CLAMP has so many fans is that they create such intricate and deep relationships like KuroxFai and then intentionally fall short of satsifying people like us so we then have to write our fics to make up for it...

hey, it's been a while since i last reviewed but i like how this story's turning out. there's just heavy angst, though. :D
and you know, i'm starting to learn about mythology and widening my dictionary, thanks to you. anywho, i'm just saying that you're doing a pretty good job. :D don't give up.