This was very good and really cute (:

This lemon is one of best i've read.

You showed how both of them loved each other on all levels, physically, mentally, emotionally, etc.

I'm glad you didn't use the usual, today's society of vulgar slang and instead showed two people who made love to each other.

Good job.

I thought it was good, especially for a first time lemon! lol yeah i always worry about people's reactions to the lemons i write but it always reassures and encourages me at the good resposes ive recieved so far! And im sure you're recieving a good response to this one so write more! lol :)

i must say
this lemon was very very beautiful
you did an excellent job on this

Incredible writing. For a first time lemon you managed to incorporate a story about people making love. Not sex. Intimacy at its finest.

that and you made me have to clean my computer screen after it steamed up.

*cheers*

This is your first? Its awesome! *lovesit*

I really liked this :]]
Great job!

Not a bad lemon...This is your 1st one after all.

Awesome. Truly awesome for a first time. I couldn't have done any better myself. Actually, you might have even done BETTER than me! hehe! Anyway, loved it! Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Nice ain't the word - this is GREAT. You put quite a bit of thought into this and it shows through. Again, great job on it.
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its good

I know lemons, and that was very good for a first time. You have a really good talent for this huh? Hope to see more of your work, and can't wait for the update on SE.

That was your first lemon? That was amazing! You definitely have talent. You have any advice for writing? Keep up the great work! Long live NaruSaku!

that was so rich, powerful and perfectlt written, bravo!

that was an AWESOME FIRST LEMON I LOVED IT. I HOPE YOU MAKE MORE BECAUSE THAT WAS GREAT. THE ONLY THING YOU NEED TO DO IF YOU WANT TO IS MAKE IT MORE GRAPHIC