this is fricken awesome! why haven't you updated in a year?

This was so funny, i loved every bit of it! you have to release more chapter it is so awesome, can't wait to see what happens next! The only weird thing was they were like human-form characters, but ah well, it was still good and i can't wait for what other crazy things happen with these teens

This chapter scares me even more! U_U I'm still gonna read though...

Yeah! Another chapter!
I liked this was, though, it was Pohatu centric.
I can't wait for the next one.
Yeah!

LOL. Pohatu is such a **...well, you are what you eat, and eh...

Never mind that last comment. I have been ingesting way too much caffeine and do not know what I am saying.

H'ANYWAY! That one line, about the "talk" Lewa and Onua had...priceless. Like seriously, PRICELESS. XD

Apologies. Yeah, I deserve that. Sorry. It was just so suspenseful! Good chapter! I kinda lost track of who was talking, though. And what's 'The Witch'? More suspense?

- Bfahome

That was very... confusing. It was a bit hard to follow this time. But otherwise good. Please update fast.
PS: I hope you are better now, hospitals are awful.

I said UPDATE! I don't like long breaks between chappies! Randomness time! THE SOX ARE WINNING! IN UR FACE COLORADO! It's almost 1 am, whadda you expect?

0.o I've been thinking(which is always a good thing...) I've never seen a story like this about bionicle before, and it's rather refreshing :D

lovely work once again! XD and very funny!

O_o w0w. Interesting. Creepy. Kinda perverted *glares at Pohatu*. Another surprisingly good Human-Bionicle fic. I BEG of you! PLZ ^D8 (please update)! The suspense is killing me! *drops to floor choking* MEDIC! Yeah. I'm crazy. Anywho, update soon, or face the wrath of the Mushroom Toads! Please.

- Bfahome, who else?

What was that noise?! Cant wait to know what happens next!

lol, creepy chapter! Funny in some parts, but the end was really good. Oh dear god, not this again. The marshmellow scene reminded me once of when we were over at my grandparents house, in the woods. I was with my three older cousins and my bro, and of course two of my little cousins (who are 6 and 4) One of my cousins started to be a pervert (Like that's not a surprise) and it ended up that we couldn't say the word 'stick' for like three days, thanks to his remarks. With little kids around. That was just like a deja vue of that, so I thought it was pretty funny. Great story, love teh chapter!
Sylla Shadowfrost

I love this story, even if I don't love horrors. It's so funny! ^^ And Gali, back off of Tahu, HE'S MINE! *Huggles Tahu* You belong with Kopaka-nii ^^... Wait... That would mean in this story, it's incest... ._. Still... TAHU'S MINE! >.>

Kopaka: No he's not, I forbid you to ever seeing him... -.-

WA! Koko-nii! Why you gotta be so mean!? V_V

Kopaka: DON'T YOU DARE CALL ME THAT! It was cute when we were kids, NOW IT'S JUST WRONG! I'm a grown man!

Your still my big brother ^^ And even if your a cold bastard now, your still the same old Koko-nii underneath it all... *Hands him a cup of hot coco*

Kopaka: ...You win this round... *Sips at the chocolate drink*

Anyway, my point is... GREAT JOB! ^^ KEEP IT UP! *Still huggling Tahu with Kopaka glaring and drinking coco*

You cut it off at the good part! *FURY!* XD No, I'm just kidding! This is proceeding nicely, and it's keeping me and my brother at the edge of our seats (or more precisely, the edge of the couch we're sitting on right now). Good job, can't wait for more!

PS: Favorite part: "There is no ** way I'm getting out of this tent." XD

HOW exactly do Onua and Lewa get when they're alone? -wink wink-

lolz ^_^

love the story!!