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| Lady Seraph 2007-12-20 ch 4, | abuseThis chapter scares me even more! U_U I'm still gonna read though... |
| Magdalan-Saiyan-Toa 2007-11-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseYeah! Another chapter! I liked this was, though, it was Pohatu centric. I can't wait for the next one. Yeah! |
| Saya Moonshadow 2007-11-01 ch 4, | abuseLOL. Pohatu is such a **...well, you are what you eat, and eh... Never mind that last comment. I have been ingesting way too much caffeine and do not know what I am saying. H'ANYWAY! That one line, about the "talk" Lewa and Onua had...priceless. Like seriously, PRICELESS. XD |
| Bfahome 2007-11-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseApologies. Yeah, I deserve that. Sorry. It was just so suspenseful! Good chapter! I kinda lost track of who was talking, though. And what's 'The Witch'? More suspense? - Bfahome |
| LatayaLuna 2007-11-01 ch 4, | abuseThat was very... confusing. It was a bit hard to follow this time. But otherwise good. Please update fast. PS: I hope you are better now, hospitals are awful. |
| Bfahome 2007-10-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseI said UPDATE! I don't like long breaks between chappies! Randomness time! THE SOX ARE WINNING! IN UR FACE COLORADO! It's almost 1 am, whadda you expect? |
| dark raven0 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuse0.o I've been thinking(which is always a good thing...) I've never seen a story like this about bionicle before, and it's rather refreshing :D lovely work once again! XD and very funny! |
| Bfahome 2007-10-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseO_o w0w. Interesting. Creepy. Kinda perverted *glares at Pohatu*. Another surprisingly good Human-Bionicle fic. I BEG of you! PLZ ^D8 (please update)! The suspense is killing me! *drops to floor choking* MEDIC! Yeah. I'm crazy. Anywho, update soon, or face the wrath of the Mushroom Toads! Please. - Bfahome, who else? |
| LatayaLuna 2007-10-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseWhat was that noise?! Cant wait to know what happens next! |
| Sylla Shadowfrost 2007-10-13 ch 3, | abuselol, creepy chapter! Funny in some parts, but the end was really good. Oh dear god, not this again. The marshmellow scene reminded me once of when we were over at my grandparents house, in the woods. I was with my three older cousins and my bro, and of course two of my little cousins (who are 6 and 4) One of my cousins started to be a pervert (Like that's not a surprise) and it ended up that we couldn't say the word 'stick' for like three days, thanks to his remarks. With little kids around. That was just like a deja vue of that, so I thought it was pretty funny. Great story, love teh chapter! Sylla Shadowfrost |
| Lady Seraph 2007-10-13 ch 3, | abuseI love this story, even if I don't love horrors. It's so funny! ^^ And Gali, back off of Tahu, HE'S MINE! *Huggles Tahu* You belong with Kopaka-nii ^^... Wait... That would mean in this story, it's incest... ._. Still... TAHU'S MINE! >.> Kopaka: No he's not, I forbid you to ever seeing him... -.- WA! Koko-nii! Why you gotta be so mean!? V_V Kopaka: DON'T YOU DARE CALL ME THAT! It was cute when we were kids, NOW IT'S JUST WRONG! I'm a grown man! Your still my big brother ^^ And even if your a cold bastard now, your still the same old Koko-nii underneath it all... *Hands him a cup of hot coco* Kopaka: ...You win this round... *Sips at the chocolate drink* Anyway, my point is... GREAT JOB! ^^ KEEP IT UP! *Still huggling Tahu with Kopaka glaring and drinking coco* |
| Saya Moonshadow 2007-10-12 ch 3, | abuseYou cut it off at the good part! *FURY!* XD No, I'm just kidding! This is proceeding nicely, and it's keeping me and my brother at the edge of our seats (or more precisely, the edge of the couch we're sitting on right now). Good job, can't wait for more! PS: Favorite part: "There is no ** way I'm getting out of this tent." XD |
| Arya-Metru 2007-10-12 ch 3, | abuseHOW exactly do Onua and Lewa get when they're alone? -wink wink- lolz ^_^ love the story!! |
| LatayaLuna 2007-10-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis chapter was pretty funny, but i cant wait for the horror. Please update fast. |
| Namless Daydreamer 2007-10-11 ch 2, | abuseplease hurry up w/ next chap.,this is so frickin' awsome! |