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| mandrakefunnyjuice 2008-01-02 ch 5, | abuseHey, you're back! You haven't died! Yay! Even though it's just a chapter re-write, IT IS A SIGN THAT YOU HAVE RETURNED! (rejoices) I agree with you on the fourth-episode-OVA thing. It shouldn't be allowed. Anywho, welcome back, ta-ta for now, keep writing. :D Happy new year and stuff! -MFJ |
| Amekoryuu 2008-01-02 ch 5, | abuseXD So she got some new clothing, it'll be intresting to see what happened next chapter. |
| mandrakefunnyjuice 2007-10-16 ch 4, | abuseI gotta say, I love the way you write. Man, I wish I could write like that. Most of what I end up coming with is this jumbled mess of my own thoughts and speculations, but you...? Wow. It's very flowing, and you are very talented. Oh, and I'm glad someone else thinks that Kratos looks like a plum besides me. :D Keep up the good work! |
| Kitty-Katz-Katz 2007-10-13 ch 4, | abuseTeehee! Lloyd has more brains than a cucumber after all! Aw, I hope your cold goes away soon! ^^ I hate having a cold. It's awful... |
| emi the cookie monster 2007-10-13 ch 4, | abuseAnd that, marked the beginning of the regeneration of the world. Sort of. HAHA. KRATOS A PURPLE PLUM WITH RED HAIR. ROFL. You crack me up. x3 Please update soon. ^3^ |
| Kitty-Katz-Katz 2007-10-11 ch 3, | abuseLOL LOL LOLLIES LOL! Hehe...orange hurricane...hehehe... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
| KivaEmber 2007-10-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseA good Self insert! I like it thus far! |
| emi the cookie monster 2007-10-11 ch 3, | abuse"Lies, I mumbled back to Mieu, continuing to watch this little performance. I swear, when the time comes, I am going to enjoy kicking his ass to the next millennium. I don’t care if that’s when I’m betraying them with Kratos; the angel’s ass is going out the window and all the way to Derris-Kharlan." That made me burst out laughing. Srsly. HAHA. UPDATE PLZ. I love this story so far. |
| Kitty-Katz-Katz 2007-10-08 ch 2, | abuseOkay, this. is. so. awesome! Lots of dialogue, love that. Lots of Kratos-annoying, also love that. =D Update soon! |